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Re: Death
I'm sorry for the guy who drowned near you're house :S R.I.P to him too :) I found your poem very touching :') It was very powerful and meaningful. I ...
Sep 8, 2011 -
Re: Dancing with the stars
Hi Deanie! Your poem was beautiful but a little confusing. Your poem consisted of fully questions. At least for me. Not exactly FULLY questions but then as I kept reading ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: Stone Cold Eyes
Hi Snikkia! Good Job with the poem :) I loved it but I still don't get the meaning of the poem. You say 'Stone Cold Eyes' but then you talk ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: Just another broken heart in the sand
Hey BlondieMissyAngel! I know I'm late to review but I found this poem very touching and the title distracted me a lot and I couldn't afford to read and leave ...
Sep 3, 2011 -
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Hi again YouWishYouHadThis :) It's a very nice poem but I think it so repetitive! >.< That bugged me so much! I mean each line I read it becomes so ...
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: Solitude
Hey Shikha! xD First off, it's a very nice poem you've got here ^^ Second off, there are 3 or 4 lines where you must have put it first instead ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: Fire's Escape
Hey Xreigon! :D Thanks for remembering to request me you're new poems! ^^ Makes me feel that at least someone remembers me =) First off, I would like to say ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: A saw a Poem
Hey Cailey!!! First off, You're title is wrong :P It's "I saw a Poem". Maybe it was a mistake but just correcting. Now, off to the poem ^^ The poem ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Darkness
A'ola Hiccup. My name is Lakshmi and I'll be reviewing you're poem today ^^ Darkness is a good poem though there are many confusions and questions unanswered. So here's what ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: It will happen again
Hello xD First of all, for a first timer, Good job! :'D I'm very proud of you and I really mean it. Just tiny mistakes here and there. Maybe with ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The boy you have to watch
Hello Boolovesyou :) You're poem was quite interesting at first but came down to confusion. I don't know if it really matches to the title but I think it didn't ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: All The Voices In My Head
Hey! Nice Poem but grammar dude! Lost it at many places :S Corrections: #1: I close my eyes and wait for sleep, but it dances beyond my grasp. Any dream ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: I need help Believing....
Hello! Good job! Reading this Poem has been worth a read. There are some mistakes here and there.... #1: I need help believing, That you are on my side. That ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Life in my ice-cream salad.
Soxieee xDD I didn't have any other poetry to review so I'm reviewing this one! :) I thought you're life was Chocolate? :P Anyway, you're poem was cute and wonderful! ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Open Sea
Hey YouWishYouHadThis (Funny Name) ;) Anyway, I LOVE THIS! Though very disappointed that it was very short piece :) One thing I found wrong. This is the poem you wrote: ...
Aug 28, 2011
