Chirantha

I can't believe you said that this needs work. I mean it was awesome. Clearly, you are intending to do this. Just kidding. :wink: Bright colors all around her, greens ...

I thought that some would write some thing like this, and I was write. Well, that was a great poem. You use of strong words gave the poem a great ...

Hi, Esteria. Welcome to YWS. Well, I think I should first say that you should do reviews before posting any other works. As you had already done two, you need ...

Well, your poem was good. Only, I couldn't understand of what you were writing about. Well, it must be your use of serious metaphors and lines. It blasted all her ...

Hey, great poem. I also felt a lump on my throat after reading it. Although, that might be because of my sore throat. :lol: You were like this? Awww, that's ...

Wow, I liked it. As everyone says, it was short, sweet and straight to the point. And the poem being shorter has it's advantages, like not making the reader bored ...

Ooh, I liked this story. It certainly was different from many other story I had read. I got one question though, are you yourself is in the story or another ...

Awww, how cute. Seemingly, it would be great if it had a rhyme, but, it was good. If fish go to school all day, and children keep [s]on[/s] swimming (I ...

Now this was a great poem. Your use of those words made a great change in the poem. The deep hidden meaning in poem was also great. It was so ...

You said it alright. It was short. But, nevertheless, it was interesting. :D “You know, I don’t have friend in my class.” Put it as 'a friend' or 'friends' Wow, ...

Hey, fun. Glad to reivew this at last. I reached home after the tiring day at school of doing absolutely nothing. Good start. It was humorous. “Yeah, so what’s up?” ...

The first chapter. I think I like the way this was written. Welld done. :D The pale blue bodies glowing and their see-through wings flitting back and forth in their ...

At last, I'm reviewing this. This story looks good. But you seemed to jump from place to place. It's a simple mistake. And some parts I couldn't even understand. Well, ...

:cry: I feel so sad after reading this. It was so sad. Fall away sweet child Fall away from this world With its hatred With its violence With its uncertain ...

This was the most beautiful poem I had read. It showed the love, passion and affection. I mean, I don't know how you chose the exact words to make this ...