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ChipsMcCoy

  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, Humor Re: The Whole Enchilada

    Hey, Chips here with a review and a slightly belated warm welcome to YWS! Well, I really enjoyed reading your essay overall. It was great to see a spiritual text ...

    Aug 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Baby Girl

    Hello, Chips here with a review. I found that this poem seemed to be quite a personal one, I can see the thought you put into writing it. This is ...

    Aug 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Day In The Memories Of Summer

    Hey, Chips here with a review. You are actually my 100th review! celebrations aside, you have a nice poem here. You had good, vivid descriptions and your rhyme scheme worked, ...

    Aug 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: To See The Sky

    Hey, Chips here with a review. You have a great use of imagery in your poem, and interesting metaphors. I really liked the way you expressed yourself, it created an ...

    Aug 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: A Wascally Wabbit

    Hey, Chips here with a review. Well, this was a short story indeed. I liked your title, "Wascally Wabbit", I recognise it from a cartoon - Elmer Fudd called Bugs ...

    Aug 24, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A curious case of a follower/stalker.

    Hello Chips here with a review. I thought this piece was quite relate-able since social media has made it very simple to find people. I wouldn't really call this a ...

    Aug 23, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: Ariel

    Hey Em, why am I only seeing this now? Hooray I'm glad you've written a new work which I'm going to review for you. My first impression after reading this ...

    Aug 20, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Other Re: We Took Our Coffee Differently

    Hey dianneece, Chips here to review your story. Most short stories don't hook me in at first glance, but yours managed to. I really liked this story, it had a ...

    Aug 19, 2014
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Other Re: A Prayer for Robin Williams

    Hey, Chips here with a review for you. The news about Robin Williams' death was truly a shocking tragedy and I'm glad to see a work paying homage to him ...

    Aug 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Rants of Heartbreak

    Hey, Chips here with a review for you. This seemed like a personal piece of writing, it had the emotions of anger, frustration and a new found strength, towards the ...

    Aug 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: The crystal ball

    Hey, Chips here with a review. Your title was quite intriguing, I liked how it implied a sense of mystique in a person's eyes. I also liked some adjectives and ...

    Aug 17, 2014
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: An Essay about Writing

    Hey, Chips here with a review. For writers especially, this "Essay" seemed to be very appropriate and could be helpful to some. I know you've stated that this isn't a ...

    Aug 10, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: Drowning in your love

    Hello, Chips here with a review. I'm really glad I stumbled upon your lyrical piece today. It was refreshing to see a song, which is Christian based that seemed to ...

    Aug 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: colors of insomnia

    Hey fortis, Chips here with a review. I liked your title, it was an interesting use of metaphor which was continued on to your actual poem. I assume the lowercase ...

    Aug 8, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Dramatic, General Re: Suicide

    Hey, Chips here with a review. This seemed like a sensitive topic of discussion for an essay. Unfortunately, quite a few people can relate with suicide, whether it being having ...

    Aug 5, 2014


There is a difference between being poor and being broke: broke is temporary; poor is eternal.
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