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Re: The Whole Enchilada
Hey, Chips here with a review and a slightly belated warm welcome to YWS! Well, I really enjoyed reading your essay overall. It was great to see a spiritual text ...
Aug 26, 2014 -
Re: Baby Girl
Hello, Chips here with a review. I found that this poem seemed to be quite a personal one, I can see the thought you put into writing it. This is ...
Aug 25, 2014 -
Re: A Day In The Memories Of Summer
Hey, Chips here with a review. You are actually my 100th review! celebrations aside, you have a nice poem here. You had good, vivid descriptions and your rhyme scheme worked, ...
Aug 25, 2014 -
Re: To See The Sky
Hey, Chips here with a review. You have a great use of imagery in your poem, and interesting metaphors. I really liked the way you expressed yourself, it created an ...
Aug 25, 2014 -
Re: A Wascally Wabbit
Hey, Chips here with a review. Well, this was a short story indeed. I liked your title, "Wascally Wabbit", I recognise it from a cartoon - Elmer Fudd called Bugs ...
Aug 24, 2014 -
Re: A curious case of a follower/stalker.
Hello Chips here with a review. I thought this piece was quite relate-able since social media has made it very simple to find people. I wouldn't really call this a ...
Aug 23, 2014 -
Re: Ariel
Hey Em, why am I only seeing this now? Hooray I'm glad you've written a new work which I'm going to review for you. My first impression after reading this ...
Aug 20, 2014 -
Re: We Took Our Coffee Differently
Hey dianneece, Chips here to review your story. Most short stories don't hook me in at first glance, but yours managed to. I really liked this story, it had a ...
Aug 19, 2014 -
Re: A Prayer for Robin Williams
Hey, Chips here with a review for you. The news about Robin Williams' death was truly a shocking tragedy and I'm glad to see a work paying homage to him ...
Aug 17, 2014 -
Re: Rants of Heartbreak
Hey, Chips here with a review for you. This seemed like a personal piece of writing, it had the emotions of anger, frustration and a new found strength, towards the ...
Aug 17, 2014 -
Re: The crystal ball
Hey, Chips here with a review. Your title was quite intriguing, I liked how it implied a sense of mystique in a person's eyes. I also liked some adjectives and ...
Aug 17, 2014 -
Re: An Essay about Writing
Hey, Chips here with a review. For writers especially, this "Essay" seemed to be very appropriate and could be helpful to some. I know you've stated that this isn't a ...
Aug 10, 2014 -
Re: Drowning in your love
Hello, Chips here with a review. I'm really glad I stumbled upon your lyrical piece today. It was refreshing to see a song, which is Christian based that seemed to ...
Aug 10, 2014 -
Re: colors of insomnia
Hey fortis, Chips here with a review. I liked your title, it was an interesting use of metaphor which was continued on to your actual poem. I assume the lowercase ...
Aug 8, 2014 -
Re: Suicide
Hey, Chips here with a review. This seemed like a sensitive topic of discussion for an essay. Unfortunately, quite a few people can relate with suicide, whether it being having ...
Aug 5, 2014
