ChimeraMania

"Who are you? No, in fact , what are you?" "Now, I'll ask you again, where are they?" When did he ask the first time?? GOSH. Stop having me on ...

It was incredible that he was barely showing a single drop of sweat, *showed* Maybe? Because I'm having a hard time reading this sentence with the word showing. It fits, ...

Suddenly he felt himself go numb. his eyebrows narrowed in the reflection of the window as he turned a scarlet colour. 'Suddenly he felt himself go numb. His eyebrows narrowed ...

His grief and rage had fallen dormant at the sound of that voice, but now they had both awoken from their slumber slightly. If the voice isn't in his head ...

"Unfortunately, we have no information on these matters, in fact, this is new information, even to us." Tobias answered with his eyebrows raised. "On other matters, if Lord Venom is ...

So I'm new to this novel, but after I review this I'll definitely read the others. ONWARD TO THE REVIEWING. The curtains were drawn, but light squeezed through the curtains, ...

WOW....I was not expected this. Oh and sorry I didn't do much of a review last chapter. I really wanted to look at the next one because it was really ...

Hey Hey, here for reading, but decided to review as well. I don't know if anybody else has mentioned this but... A billion billion lives depended on his choices today. ...

First in foremost. ‘Hurry up, of course I’m hurrying, hurry up he says…’ I kind of feel as though you should take out the first hurry up here. Since he's ...

SO I read the first chapter and now I here to read more. First and probably only foremost. I feel as though you should change / '

Hey Hey Sharrae here to review. (I really hope I having been saying 'hey hey Sharrae hey to review', I almost made that mistake.) So first in foremost. Kyle is ...

Whoa, this is going to be quite a LONG read. Whelp here I go. First in foremost. Simon, trying not to vomit, looked down; and vomited again. 'Simon, trying not ...

Hey Hey it's me again. A thought just came to me. Ignore what I said on Chapter 2 pt. 1 about it not being long enough. I just realized (yeah ...

Hey Hey, here to review this as well. First in foremost. I was sick that day and you know how it is with textbook explanations.” I keep debating about this. ...

HEYO :P Sharrae here for a review on this lovely day. First in foremost. the walls couldn’t distract her as they had through many a boring speech. [color=red]"..the walls couldn't ...