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: Scratches head : I can't find anything to say about this poem except for: WOW

I really like this...I just think the this should have gone in the Lyric section. Also, the title and the first line are sort of sappy.

I like, really really really like your style. I can't come up with anything to say about it! Honestly!,lol

Heh...well, I liked this...but not a lot. However, I must admit that your ability to rhyme and keep the rhythym going is really good--and I admire that, because Lord knows ...

thanks jack for understanding!,lol anyway, it was supposed to be confusing--no one was supposed to understand. it was actually a real poem, i just went and mixed up the words ...

well, i was rather dissapointed that i spent my last few minutes of time online wasting my time reading this... :sighs: okay i need to stop being so mean. please ...

Yeah, I really want to make changes to this poem but its virtually impossible because there's so much meaning to this poem...there's so much which I don't know how to ...

It sounded so much like something from a book! Oh, Galatea I loved this! I have nothing else to say.

Well, it seems a combination of a narrative and a lyric poem you ask me--not really dramatic. But anyway, I usually have a comment or suggestion about everything that I ...

Thanks Emma, but I still feel like something is missing...I'd appreciate if anyone could suggest or add anything to it in you don't mind...:wink:. But yeah, it's about a girl ...

Wow...I love your writing style...that's all I can say. You do a really great job. :Two thumbs up:

Lol...yes we do have 'expressions' (I guess). But I have just never really heard tip-toeing being referred to in this form. However, I have to remember you live in the ...

When I wrote this poem, I had been inspired and influenced by this song called Circle by Plus One...if you want to hear the whole thing free, just go to ...

thanks a lot...even though he made me not give him the credit, brad (incadescence) is the one that rephrased it,lol.

Hey thanx, but my work is no way NEAR as good as yours. Im glad you liked it Im normally rubbish at poems. OMG...I am flattered...you made my day! :lol: ...