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That was a very helpful comment, Brad.

It's nice to see Bubblewrapped around! Well, I have to say, I loved it from beginning to end.

You have a lot of power in your words. From reading your poetry, it's evident that you spend a lot of time intricately placing words together...with you it seems like ...

"Locked away in the towers of safety Shackled to protection’s prison" It seemed like there should have been something in between that.

I'm always a sucker for California poems... :sighs: makes me think of home. I loved it.

: sighs : okay, let's try this again. "hybridization of streetsludge and mortalblood" AGH!! TOO many big words for one line! "Americana died sometime ago. New York is but the ...

I looked at this, because I hate it when people make fun of the South. Me being from Alabama, I've heard enough of it. Had you not been a Southerner ...

this was very interesting! i dont ever recall reading something of this calibur from you. you had an unusual way of captivating the reader, but it was excellent, and i ...

I liked this...I disliked it...I'm not sure which I'm leaning to the most, probably somewhere in the middle. It was cliche, but yet, I felt like it was something new. ...

did you...change something?

(in reference to the title) :Claps: Thank you.

"Your big goofy grin shines like the rays of the sun, " Talking about awkward...hm... The rest of the poem was so so, but I cannot complain because it's better ...

"All of her emotions, Held up inside," Straight away I was reminded of Nobody's Home by Avril Lavigne the entire song. And considering that I don't like her...

Liz: Learn to spell everything.

thanks again--especially to brad--that really means something to me. maybe i'll write a poem today...