Chevy

Thanks so much Rei. It's one of my personal favorites I think.... Oh, and I love "Morgaine Le Fey" under your username. :) I guess because it's so closed to ...

Thanks Chevy I'll see what I can do. Im a total noob at poems, infact this is my 5th I think ever written. For a fifth poem, this was great. ...

:dies: um...wow...i didn't know you had that in you, my friend...surprise, surprise! how were you able to write this? i was detailed... experience, maybe? =P

"you know i'd dance for you even at midnight when the sun has died and i can't see except for your sparkling eyes they'd illuminate my soul but my pillow ...

"Tie it up in chains, hold it tight Grip it down with all my might" Was a little irritating. Overall, this poem was very dramatic. I loved the last line.

For some reason when I read this poem, I thought about the Civil War...I have noooo idea why...

Group it all together and make it a letter to somebody. It's a lot better that way. And that's all I can say.

It was short and to the point... & I don't mean to sound stupid...but...what language is this?

wow...thanks guys! im so flattered...thanks...

I don't know why I posted this really. Without reading all my diary entries from when I was younger, I don't think anyone will understand what I'm saying except for ...

Well, I guess it's cool to be "off the top" of your head. However, in the first line...did you mean "dispair?" I liked the first stanza. It sounds a lot ...

People, I need some more comments on this! Come on!

Perhaps you should ditch the "pup" line... However, I'll have to agree with Rei.

Yeah. I realized that after I wrote it. But I don't know where or what to add! Agh! I'm so pitiful.

My socks. I don't like Apple Jacks.