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they're repetitive they're vague they're cliche they're overrated they're the same things i know you've heard them for years. That was pathetic and you know it. The "until now"s were ...

Yes I know. The ending is rather dopey but oh well I made changes. :)

But I don't know how to end a poem with a Bang. Occasionally, it will come to me but...not usually. So it probably will remain a dead poem.

I just realized that is on myspace a zillion times.

I agree with Jack. But the title was my favorite probably. Please don't trash this poem, Brad...or I when I come to Texas I'll...I'll...I don't know.

It was really nice...cliche--but it made a good song.

I did like it. Even though I'm quite sure it would take forever to learn the words.

Wow. I'm really starting to like your style. How long have you been writing? Your work is very soothing and easy to read.

How very Avril Lavignish. I think it's a very nice early teen song. My 13 year old sister would like it. But heck, they need music too. Personally, not my ...

Perhaps it should be the end. I do think you should repeat yourself sometime...especially since it's a song and it's kind of short. I think it would kinda cool if ...

You are really yourself in your writings. Is this a poem or a song? It's great either way, but I think it's better a song. The rhyming did not bother ...

This would be a great song with all diminished chords and such. Maybe like 7 of them, and just rotating after every strum. *Shudders* I wish I wrote this.

I finally figured out the music for it last night! YAY! But I fell asleep ontop of a electric guitar and an acoustic on my leg...I woke up this morning--I ...

Yeah, it's a lot better now that it's edited.

A little lengthy and in a strange way kind of boring. However, it had a good point. Finally, something I understand.