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your poems are so different from each other. it didn't used to be this way...they used to be like, all together they told a story like that time you put ...

I think the title kind of spolied it...well, if what's in quotations at the top is the title, that is. However this line was great: "This first kiss, so different ...

Oh, wow Brett! That was amazing. It was very easy-going and straight to the point. The M-F part didn't really fit for me but oh well. The poem was awesome. ...

This was nice, but I feel guilty saying it again and again but I'm going to say it anyway. You have toooo much imagery! It's so much I'm trying to ...

It was a little lengthy but I enjoyed reading it. But wouldn't this be narrative? I'm not sure. It's kind of tied in between. However, I don't think this is ...

"the colourful bracelets on her wrist, the long chunky necklace, the scars on her arms and legs. they wrap around her skin, some faded, some like ropes. " Oh, this ...

Yeah, some of it was hard to understand. Especially the first stanza. It seemed to be kind of drifty but perhaps that's what you were going for. computer paradiso in ...

It wasn't so much the repition that bothered me in this poem, it was just how personal it was. Honestly, I think this belongs in the Lyric Poetry section and ...

Well, if I never heard you talk about your brother before or anything I probably wouldn't have liked it or understood it. But I have you talk about your brother ...

I liked the bold at the end I liked the angstiness (if that's even a word)...I liked everything. I don't think I've ever been able to relate to something that ...

The fact that it's about a relationship makes it uber cliche. I understand that this is a true to life situation, but...yeah. I must admit though, the emotion was really ...

And might as well be dead because We are all better off without her near Around us, talking about us Why won't she leave me alone? Why won't shw just ...

I've never read anything by you before. It was...interesting. Reminded of something Britney Spears or Mandy Moore would sing when I actually used to listened to them way back in ...

It seemed kind of narrative to me, but with a dramatic sense to it. I thought it was great how you took just one event and turned it into a ...

That was wonderful. I couldn't tell who wrote what. "Now you are flocking to hellbent angels pleading for forgiveness, some kind of redemption for what can not be unspoken. It ...