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It is engaging, right from the first line.

Thanks for the way you analysed my poem. I'll take the issue you had with it as a compliment. Thanks again!

Thanks for the review. Ashes are all part of the image 'the speaker' gets!

What a thoughtful and elegant poem. I feel the title would be better if you used, say, the first line of the poem.

I understand the structure is to help create the picture (and hey this has a way of showing climax), but it is overdone and diverting. Again the poem is rather ...

Would have said these exact same things - cliches and typos. However I enjoyed it tremendously.

What a stroke! I love the structure.

I love this piece.

Beautiful

Hi! This is beautiful. I don't know, but that is how I think when I feel so much.

Hi! AntoniaClarke, I found 'Hands' compelling for two reasons. Firstly it was confident (something not to be found in large deposits around this site). Secondly, and this makes good sense ...