Cheetah

Hi, Cheetah here! This was really good, it expressed how much we love writing! This was my favorite part: It’s in our nature As us writers at home To yearn ...

Well, good luck!!

Oh ok, I get it now! The whole emotion thing, I mean. So there IS another chapter. Thanks for telling me, I'll be sure to look into it! ;)

Free submissions- aren't they great? ;)

Wow! That was really good! I liked the technique you used by saying the oxygen's level decreasing, it gave me a wider perspective and added suspense. I also liked how ...

This is something I've never seen before, but I like it! It was simple, but with a different idea. Your formatting is excellent! There's really nothing I can critique about ...

I think this is great! It seems open to writer's because you choose to use a pen. Thanks for sharing!

I like what you said, if you don't read Harry Potter, you really ARE missing out on life. Harry Potter is the best thing ever!!! :D

I'm sorry you feel like this. I just have one piece of advice and that's to look for friends that aren't trying to be popular, look for ones that just ...

This. Was. Amazing. Thank you so much for writing it! :D

Thanks for the graphic description- I think I'll stay with Bide.

And Questio? I just have one favor to ask: if you someone combine these two stories or make anymore apocalyptic ones, PM ME!!!!!!!! You are an AMAZING writer!!

Wow. That...that was amazing. I loved the ragdoll metaphor- it really gave a good description of what your life was like. Welcome to YWS, thank you so much for sharing, ...

I agree. Thanks a ton.

Nice, I guess, if the point was to make me feel a bit diseased. I truly felt sorry for the man until I realized that didn't actually happen. Apocalyptic-wise it ...