Cheetah

Hello, Cheetah again to review this next chapter! This was so intense! I liked it a lot. The way you portray the emotion is amazing. I could feel her frustration ...

Hello! Cheetah here to review your chapter! This was really good! Wow, you started off great and I definitely want to read more. You kept things moving ahead at a ...

Hi, Cheetah here to review for you this wonderful day! Interesting, I normally like stories that have dialogue because it helps me draw a better picture, but you used no ...

Hi there! Cheetah here to review your piece! Wow. If this was made to scare, well done! Towards the end, it became impossible for me to take my eyes of ...

Hi! Cheetah here to review your piece! This was amazing. I absolutely loved it. The format you wrote in is very unique, but it definitely works. The best lines for ...

Hey there Dragon. Cheetah here to review your piece. This was really good. Right off the bat you create a theme of suspense that keeps the reader hooked. Your description ...

Hi, Cheetah here, ready to review your piece. Hm, this was okay, but it could use some work. 1) Why are there random segments in all capital letters and bold? ...

Hi, Cheetah here. I'm going to give you a post-Review Day review. You were right in the description. It is humorous in a sick way. Although I love animals, I ...

Hello Paracosm! Cheetah here, ready to review your piece on this marvelous Review Day! This was really interesting, I was hooked all the way through. Your description is amazing, you ...

Hi Quest! Cheetah here, ready to review your piece on this marvelous Review Day! This was good! I liked your use of sarcasm here: [/quote]Perfect… Stuck in a hot van ...

Hi there, Sarah! Cheetah here, ready to review your piece on Review Day! :D This was really interesting and I enjoyed reading it. You have a nice voice and I ...

Hi, Cheetah here, ready to review your piece on this wonderful Review Day. ^_^ This holds a lot of potential, but it has a lot of little errors that should ...

Hi, Cheetah here, ready to review your piece! Wow. This is so meaningful. I really loved this. This part is my favorite: Today I tried to count the stars again. ...

Hi, Cheetah here, ready to review your piece on this wonderful Review Day! This is really good. Although I haven't read the chapters before this, it looks interesting and I'd ...

Hi, Cheetah here, ready to review this piece on Review Day! I liked this. It's unique, it's repetitive, it just works. I like the way you start all the sections ...