Cheerio

Hey, AlexWrites! Thanks for the review. I'll keep it in mind as I continue to write.

Thanks so much. It's ok that the review is shorter, I'm just glad you took time to write it.

Hello! It's Cheerio! This was a really beautiful piece. I unfourtunately don't have much to review. My apologies. I loved the description of his mother. She sounds beautiful. I always ...

Note: Fellow YWS member leeleewritestories created the K-pop boy band EVOQ mentioned in this episode.

Hello, Milesperhour (again, lol). Thanks again for the review and for following the story as I post it. :)

Thanks for the review, AlexWrites! I know this episode/chapter might have been a bit much. Thank you for bearing with me. I'll keep your words in mind as I continue ...

Hey, lalalucky! Thanks so much for the feedback. All your points were great, and I'll keep them in mind as I continue to write! Thank you for your encouragement!

Thanks so much, Milesperhour133. I'll keep what you said in mind as I continue to write. Regarding the relatives, unfortunately, that is how his aunt and cousins are. You'll see ...

np :)

No problem, we all make mistakes. Don't sweat it

I totally think you should go for it

Thanks for the review! I%u2019ll be keeping all these in mind next time I write! ~Cheerio

Hey Jazz! Thanks so much for the review. This was my first time writing from an animals pov (it was for a writing challenge). I appreciate the feedback, I%u2019ll be ...

Wow, I’ve never thought about my sink so deeply before. Good work, keep writing. (Sorry for the short review) God bless ~Charli

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Very well done, I can feel the longing through the words. I myself am that person watching through the window so it’s very relatable. Sorry for the short review I ...