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Hello again, and here's my review! Well, you're still doing a good job portraying the characters. But as for this chapter's plot...how do I put it? It feels a bit ...

Well...hm. I'm not sure if there's an exact method to reviewing comedy, but I'll give it a shot anyway. The characters here are obviously to be made fun of, but ...

Disclaimer: I have not read the previous chapters. I apologize for my shallow ignorance. Well! This is certainly interesting! A seventeen-year-old "parent." That's enough to make a compelling plot, fo

Disclaimer: I have not read the previous chapters. With that said, this is pretty cool on its own. The raw power of a mother protecting her children is something not ...

I know it's not worth much, but I'm reviewing anyway. Leia knew that whenever her mother asked her father for help, then things were getting seriously bad. Mostly because her ...

Happy Review Day! *Charges* Let's see, to start: At the outskirts of the village, Astelna stood atop a small mound watching the sunset. Small mound of what? It seems insignificant, ...

I suppose I should've expected that religion alone would save the day in a spiritual short-story. There's certainly nothing wrong with it (I'm a Christian myself, actually), but it might ...

How do I go about reviewing this? As has been said, the opening is a clever little comparison, but the rest...well, I don't exactly know what you're trying to do ...

Happy Review Day! Great blazes, she did it. She actually stabbed the bastard. But, there's one crucial thing missing: The emotions. How do you feel after stabbing someone? That's a ...

Happy Review Day! *revs chainsaw* Well, as compelling as this story is, I do have a few critiques: Overall, you do a fine job of placing powerful emotions through Ruby's ...

Well, I'm jumping in partway through, but...whoa. It's pretty astounding how you're able to capture a character like Verona, and push her to her utmost limits. At the same time, ...

Have a review. First off, you've completely nailed the literary voice here! It sounds excellently cold, logical, and hunted. The flow of the sentences' lengths are also quite impressive throughout ...

Since this has no reviews, I thought it courteous: And then his super-awesome dragon (which I, of course, was named after) brought him back to life, and he got my ...

Welcome to YWS! Now then: Well, to be blunt: I'm conflicted on this. You've got a believable literary voice in narration, and some surprisingly good descriptions. However, well... Margaret's the ...

Here's a review that's long overdue. So, psychopathy is a mainly untouched topic, due to there being so many stereotypes for the disorder. Now, scientifically, psychopathy is a disorder in ...