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Hey Aley! I'm here to review your work even though I doubt I'll be helpful xD Anyway I'll just say what I think of the work and try my hardest ...

Hey! I'm here to review your work. First grammar: " But its the truth. " But it's the truth. " Mis-attribution of images is aggravating to say the least! " ...

Hey Sofie! I'm here to review your short. I hope my review is helpful. He should be a scrappy twenty-year-old sitting next to me but instead he’s just a memory. ...

Hey! I'm here to review your poem! A.N. - I wrote this a while ago, and I actually just recently stumbled upon it again, Also, despite this being written from ...

Hey! I'm here to review your work! Grammar: The crowd were slumped in their seats, velvet stained with blood. The crowd was slumped in their seats, velvet stained with blood. ...

Hey! I'm here to review your work! Firstly, Grammar: There are no windows, only harnesses and emergency lights. There are no windows, only harnesses , and emergency lights. This is ...

Hey! I'm here to review your short story. :) Let's start with Grammar: I stepped off the subway and started strolling towards the apartment, my brain was already buzzing from ...

Hey, it's marmalade! Here to review your short story! First, let's do the Grammar! Everything went silent, as if wildlife had altogether decided it was time to got to sleep ...

Hey, Sunny! I'm here for a quick review. I really thought this poem was sweet but I felt like it could use some improvement. Firstly, I think you should add ...

Hey! I'm here to review this chapter! This is my first novel review in forever! But I hope I'm still helpful. First things first: Grammar! I earned the death sentence, ...

Hey, Casanova! Sorry if my review isn't of the best quality. I'm sick right now and nausea isn't a very good thing to be dealing with when trying to be ...

Hey! It's marmalade here to review your poem, just like you requested in my thread! I hope you find my review helpful! If you have any questions feel free to ...

Hey I'm here for a review! (I used to be AliceAfternoon) Anyway onto this poem! Firstly, the grammar: Chasing butterflies I saw them once in greens and blues bathed in ...

Hey I'm here for a review! (I used to be AliceAfternoon) Anyway onto this poem! Firstly, the grammar: Some people are like the Ocean , They're Calm and Beautiful , ...

Hey I'm here for my first review as marmalade! (I used to be AliceAfternoon) Anyway onto this poem! Firstly, the grammar: People are scared to pick roses. Why? Because of ...