Charm

Hey! I'm here to review your poem! I thought this poem was so so so good. I really like it! I think that there is some punctuation needed but other ...

Hey! I'm here to review your poem. I really relate to this a lot and it reminds me of myself. I have changed quite a lot over time and this ...

Hey! I hope my review is somewhat helpful and apologies in advance to its shortness~ Let's jump in: I notice a lot of commas which can make this hard and ...

Hey! This is Rachel here for a review! I haven't read any of your other chapters but I thought I'd help you get out of the green room. I found ...

Hey! This is Rachel~ I haven't read any of your other chapters but I thought I'd help you get out of the green room. "Seating herself against the freezing and ...

Hey! This is Mad~ I haven't read any other chapters but I still thought I'd jump in and get your chapter out of the green room. i'm not going to ...

Hey Emily! I thought this was really good and I feel like a lot of people with anxiety can relate to this. "I am slave. I am not someone's possession." ...

Hey! I'm here for a review! "she gave me her shirt." This line seemed a little random and out of place. It kinda disturbed the flow. "Always, I wear my ...

Hey Ever! I agree mostly with what Yams said. I feel like this poem was not as good as your others. I seemed a little bland. I can tell that ...

I thought this poem was super cute and I loved the short stanzas. I found the last line "'Isn't spring wonderful.' I say." didn't flow as nicely as the rest ...

Oh my god! I think this is the best poem you have written and I have seen some great peoms out of you. I know this poem is personal (hehe) ...

Hey! o(*^▽^*)o I really liked this poem and I found little things here and there but nothing else. "When in blows the autumn breeze." This line confused me. I had ...

Woah! This is such an amazing poem. I really enjoyed it Monster. The imagery was very good and I loved the concept and the main idea of the poem. I ...

Hi! My name is Rachel , but most people call me Mad . Plot, Pace and Point of View I was really confused by the way you talked about the ...

Hey. I'm here to review. First off welcome to YWS! Second thing, this is not a short story but a script. If you go to edit then click publish it ...