Chanson

Thanks so much for the comments guys! Also, in an effort to look at the likes, I liked my own post... how embarrassing, sorry.

i loved this. i had a big critique written out there but i just deleted it because none of it really mattered. all that matters is, this is a very ...

"the blood vessel orchestra pounds in her ears" the end was certainly choppy, you know that, so no need to critique. i just thought i'd tell you i really loved ...

Mmm, yeah it feels like after the new shoes bit i just kind of lost the flow. I suppose I don't know how to end the poem because I don't ...

i loved the line "nostalgia won't save us from tomorrow"

had you seen the moon the other night, you would know the only word to describe it is sfumato.

i don't capitalize my "I's" and it's not because i'm lazy or because i don't go to school. but thanks for the crit apart from that! :)

This is just so pretty and simple...I've been wasting around, reading poems and finding I have nothing to say about any of them. But I really liekd this - especially, ...

i miss poetry like this. there isn't enough of it around any more. all the pretty images and words...a relief to read. i liked it. and i really liked the ...

i really liked the idea behind this. the brackets got on my nerves after a few verses but it wasn't overly annoying. no real stand out lines but definitely a ...

i don't know if it quite got it, but i really liked it.

i liked this really quite absolutely a lot. i get the feeling "but you never wanted to be called a masterpiece" will be rolling around my mind for quite sometime.

i found it confusing...and i didn't find it grabbed me enough to spend time figuring it out...i reallyreally like the first verse, but after that you lost me.

i actually found the constant repition of "again" quite soothing..it's a very simple, but it's pretty much how i feel today so that made me like it.

the title is ridiculous, i know...if anyone has any suggestions i will love them forever.