ChangeTheWorld

Change here! I'm in a reviewing competition :) Here you go! I like the title, that was what drew me here in the first place. Ice cold tears, down your ...

Hi! I'm Change how are you? I hope you like my review! But that isn't right because I know I was supposed to be with someone so where'd he go? ...

Review time! I'm the one Who always causes hell, She's the one who got hit When the hammer fell. Great opener! That is so true as well, it always seems ...

Last but not least! The final poem! This is very mysterious. I like your inspiration ;) She knows I can hear her. This is a thought provoking line for me. ...

Third poems a charm! :D I hope you aren't annoyed I'm reviewing all your work. A woman bedridden, not senile. I'm not really sure what this means. I'm pretty sure ...

This is fantastic! I'm usually wary of short poems because it's harder to really reach a reader with so few words but this is so great! It's one of those ...

As promised :) Should I crumble at your feet and become one with the dust you tread on? This is a good line. This is my life, and yet you ...

Change here! Review time! She sat there for quite a long time, Singing an old melancholic hymn. I'm pretty sure this is supposed to rhyme, but in reality, the way ...

Boom! Back again because I was interested ;) VERY descriptive. I like the first paragraph, however I feel like it's just a little too much, just a little I swear. ...

I'm already excited to read this poem, just looking at it! Here goes! The pale moon hung proud and high, Like a ghostly jewel in the darkened sky, Reigning over ...

Heyo! Change here to review this glorious work of art! X-rays through me to see the Truth I hid away. Analyze me, but you Cannot decipher my essence Through my ...

Magic number whatever it is! (I am steadily running out of creative greetings) But hi! The intruder sirens had gone off numerous times during the past eighteen years, but never ...

Review number three! Review number three! I've already said this, but you are a good titler :) You always title things well. being careful not to trip over her not ...

I liked your last piece so I might just continue reviewing your stuff for a while :D I love this idea! Especially in your first paragraph when you give the ...

You reviewed mine so I'm reviewing yours :D A fierce, howling wind whips at my bare skin and tangles my soft, golden curls as I desperately look for an escape. ...