Castiel

Hello!!! Castiel here! Okay. I really like this poem. However i am huge on word choice. In line 8 i would of used a different word for 'fragmented'. My brain ...

Hey there! Castiel here for a review! I really loved this. I think you did a great job with describing the fire. you properly described how it CAN be destructive, ...

Hey there! Castiel here for a review. So i thought that this piece was very interesting. I am not sure what you mean by she is mute (i must be ...

OH MY GOD. this is amazing.this made me almost cry. This is perfection. i love how you repeated the first line and used it at the bottom. that really concludes ...

Hey there! Castiel Here for a review! Firstly, In The last stanza, you have "I learned that a lot books are about redemption" im going to guess you forgot to ...

Hey there, Castiel is here for a review. I love this! It kind of reminds me of the mind of Vincent Van Gogh. (If you ever watch Doctor Who, they ...

Hey there, Castiel here for a review!Wow! This is very relatable. (not totally relatable for me, as I am a buddhist, but i know christians that say this.) It brings ...

Hello, Castiel Here! Awesome job! i love the poem. the only thing i didn't like about it was that some of it rhymed and some of it didn't, but i ...

Hello, Castiel Here! Wow. just, wow. this gave me chills. You did a really good job. I feel like i just watched an episode of supernatural. haha... I noticed a ...

Hello, Castiel Here! You did a great job. i can really relate to this. When i read "But what i never let myself know or feel Is that all this ...

Hello there! I love this poem! i love the way you described the silence. This was very eerie and well put together. I love how in some lines you repeated ...

Hello there! I love your poem. I like the darkness about it; it reminds me a bit of Edgar Allen Poe's writing. I love that you brought a classic fairy ...