Cassandra

Does "Clouds" need to be capatlized in the last line? Yeah. That's about as much help I can give with a haiku, I guess. They're very hard to crit. I ...

The last two lines through off every rythym and ryhming you had going for you :( Until it leads to something more deep Where I dream of you in my ...

Whew! I didn't know it was going to be this long when I started reading it. But it was worth it. :D First off--the beginning. It sounds so ordinary compared ...

I liked this because it's easy to relate to--almost everyone has gone through something like this. Do you need those hyphens in the first stanza, though? I don't think I ...

When my mom checked Tuesdays With Morrie out of the library the librarians were gushing over it..."Oh, that is such a good book!", "So touching!", etc. So you agree with ...

This is the only part I didn't like: Come, take my hand, and let me take you to another world. Yes, I'll take you to my world; I want you ...

Ooh...I liked this book. It was amusing and a fun read, though sometimes the dialouge sounded forced. I wanted to snatch the pen from the author and be like, "NO! ...

Hmmm...I think JKR recently (read: within the last two months) said that Harry is NOT a horcrux. Which is good. Because I think that'd be weird. The reason I loved ...

Picked up Interview at the book store back in seventh grade and proceeded to do a book report on friend (also a bit morbid, quite like myself) also decided to ...

The author did a fantastic job of getting into the character's head...really got into the midset of a 13/14 year old. And I believe the book was written in second ...

In this sentence you switch from the consistent past tense you have going to present tense: No one knows his pain, he was so alone. It should probably be No ...

I thought this painted a good picture of a summer evening, kind of quiet and sleepy as the sun is going down. I liked this part especially: There is an ...

Harry Potter, definitely. I've liked it since fourth grade and went to the midnight party at Borders to get Half-Blood Prince. I've tried reading The Hobbit twice, gotten about half ...

I like the subject matter. Like what it's about? Yeah, I thought that was really good. I liked the first three lines. After that, I thought the rhyming got a ...

Hooray! I get to be the first one to reply! It was a little confusing, mainly because I didn't know what was really happening...maybe that's what made it good? Maybe ...