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Re: Not Break-Skull Man
This poem was rather intense and i love that i could feel the tension in the air as if this was actually happening in front of me. I have to ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: The Willow Tree
This is a beautiful poem. It reminds me of those children's book, like the apple tree one, where the child practically grows up in the tree and nearly every memory ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Grey as running Ink
All I can say, is just... wow. This poem left me awestruck and i cannot believe the imagery in this poem. I comment about the imagery a LOT, in nearly ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Forest Love
I love the lighthearted openness of this poem it is truly a ravishing image. A plus to it is, I love the forest so that just put the cherry on ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Cold roads lead to dark places
I don't know how to respond to this, but it was so incredible i feel that i HAVE to. This was definitely a very abstruse poem, and the meanings of ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: A Smile of Light
My god this was excellent, I have no other way to describe this poem, I have read a lot of poems and this is another of my favorites. The imagery ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: mama
This was downright disturbing but it was very good as well. I think my favorite line though was, "I broke someone's wings, crushed their dreams beneath my fingertips." I don't ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: The Wall
This was deep and suspenseful. Absolutely phenomenal!!! I can just see the pain, and malice that was portrayed, representing the past. The color choices for those particular events was utterly ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Candle-lit Eyes
THis was a great poem i love the imagery, I view it as the process of life. I didn't really think of it as life until the last part: "our ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Cold is a Harsh Knife
This was really a great image for me, i loved the detail and how you didn't go overboard with it. The way everything was phrased was perfect and gave way ...
Feb 22, 2014
