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Casper16

  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Not Break-Skull Man

    This poem was rather intense and i love that i could feel the tension in the air as if this was actually happening in front of me. I have to ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: The Willow Tree

    This is a beautiful poem. It reminds me of those children's book, like the apple tree one, where the child practically grows up in the tree and nearly every memory ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Grey as running Ink

    All I can say, is just... wow. This poem left me awestruck and i cannot believe the imagery in this poem. I comment about the imagery a LOT, in nearly ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Forest Love

    I love the lighthearted openness of this poem it is truly a ravishing image. A plus to it is, I love the forest so that just put the cherry on ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Cold roads lead to dark places

    I don't know how to respond to this, but it was so incredible i feel that i HAVE to. This was definitely a very abstruse poem, and the meanings of ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: A Smile of Light

    My god this was excellent, I have no other way to describe this poem, I have read a lot of poems and this is another of my favorites. The imagery ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: mama

    This was downright disturbing but it was very good as well. I think my favorite line though was, "I broke someone's wings, crushed their dreams beneath my fingertips." I don't ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: The Wall

    This was deep and suspenseful. Absolutely phenomenal!!! I can just see the pain, and malice that was portrayed, representing the past. The color choices for those particular events was utterly ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Candle-lit Eyes

    THis was a great poem i love the imagery, I view it as the process of life. I didn't really think of it as life until the last part: "our ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Cold is a Harsh Knife

    This was really a great image for me, i loved the detail and how you didn't go overboard with it. The way everything was phrased was perfect and gave way ...

    Feb 22, 2014


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