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Re: The drip drip dripping of the rain is music unheard by human ears
Carly's corner: here for a review; *I feel the title of the poem is too lengthy, in other words, not eye catchy and interesting. it discourages readers, most especially those ...
Feb 18, 2018 -
Re: The Black Birds Song
Carly's corner; Hello @adelaide459 , I'm here for a review. Hope I don't tear you to pieces. just kidding. Not much to say, Your work is pretty intriguing. first off, ...
Feb 18, 2018 -
Re: Happy New Year from the Keepers!
Carly Here; (Last Reviews for the year): @Flumaddidle I don't know if you saw my Comment on the YWS 2017 YEAR BOOK , but like I said there, you are ...
Dec 31, 2017 -
Re: Title TBD: A One Act Play
Carly here; Good - day, i'll be really quick. And cutting right to the chase; * (JOURNALIST to the audience) - The journalist was already in character. so there was ...
Nov 27, 2017 -
Re: Shout!
Carly here - Sweet Potatoes; Good-day, I have never really reviewed any other work that I'd not poetry or an article since I joined this site. But this is a ...
Nov 26, 2017 -
Re: Hope is Blind
Carly Here: you know after taking a log break, it's good to come on here and see good works to review. "But nothing matters to the lone soul, Living under ...
Nov 25, 2017 -
Re: Bother and Bothered
Wow! Haven't done Amy review in a while...it's refreshing to do this one more time! * I know they are really short poems, but will i count this as one? ...
Nov 25, 2017 -
Re: Notes From the Night
Carly's corner: Here for a pretty short review! First off I enjoyed this poem. I had favourite lines too. I like the other part where u made as your second ...
Nov 8, 2017 -
Re: Not Mine
Carly's Corner; First of Good morning, it's exactly 8:00am here, and I just woke up. Like I am still on my bed! I'm so so happy the first thing I ...
Nov 3, 2017 -
Re: When Mindnights Cross Our Eyes
Is this a review!! yea it is!! Carly's corner: (witches): This is intriguing, I mean, I cannot help but say praise this work. Like there are one million things I ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: Deleted
Carly's corner: Good-day first of. Nice piece right there. Like I was wowed away(if there's anything like that), and sincerely there's not so much wrong with this work. Your last ...
Oct 26, 2017 -
Re: Goofballs
Carly's corner; This is a very short work, Sony review may be very short as well. I liked your work. it was nice and quick. But quick question, was this ...
Oct 25, 2017 -
Re: May The Force Be With You
Carly's Corner: First off, I'd like to officially say welcome to YWS, I've never really said that to you. And I'd appreciate the fat that you tried to punish something ...
Oct 22, 2017 -
Re: Do you remember?
Carly's here; First of, your work, was good. I liked it. but I think it was too cliché. And when writing cliché topics, there is an already set standard and ...
Oct 13, 2017 -
Re: water fire stars [draft 2 of bowing standing flying]
Carly's corner; Wow! I feel like it's been years since I did a review, but it's been weeks now though. and to think that I have to resume with yours, ...
Oct 10, 2017
