CaptainFinick

Hello again, howdy, whatsup and all the rest of it. Me being in the UK it's currently 3:15 in the morning so I got bored and thought I take a ...

Hello. Anyway I finally sorted out the problem that stopped me from getting onto YWS on my laptop (as it would turn out it was an issue with wi-fi but ...

Hello I'm Captain Finick (obviously because it says it above my comment... I think...) and today I will be reviewing your work. I think I might have reviewed a previous ...

Interesting... very interesting. I enjoyed reading this quite a lot. It sort of describes what it's like to grow up and slowly start to realise that there are things from ...

If you're normal then you're doing what people want you to do. They want you to blend in: to be like them, to think like them, to act like them. ...

I enjoyed reading this a lot. It's very relatable (especially to me) You know people say that if you're not homeless or an alcoholic or jobless you can't be hard ...

Corrupt and destruct, my mind orders me. Toxic thoughts turning fatal too fast to see. A slash, a stab and maybe even a slice to the throat. They're abandoned and ...

Can we find any life without the music around us, there would be no life, no love, no happiness. There is music for everyone, not just for the rich. IN ...

Who are you to me? A mother and a father An ultimate fighter Always trying to bring us higher Showing us what's right and wrong Picking us when we fall ...

Escape , escape from all these thoughts , press delete and let them go . Feel empty in a different , better way. But they don't stop, the fireflies full ...

The girl he loves is gone. Lost for now, maybe forever. If your true love leaves, Where does that leave you? After that you’re left alone, Loneliness is all that ...

Tendrils of smoke billow out, the window panes are smudged. Soot stains the pure white outline, of the house that time made still. Walking down the borderline, gunshots ring out ...

Well written although a block of text tends to make people turn away from reading something. Add paragraphs to make it easy for people to read. Not sure what the ...

Nice vocabulary in here but you should really have separated it out. A large block of text, even one like this, tends to make people not want to read. There ...

Why do I love it so much? Maybe it is the soft bed of moss that covers the ground in the forest, Maybe it is the smell of the ocean ...