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Re: One Day
hello there, thegirlwhowrites! WOW! This poem is amazing! I absoluteley loved it! It has fantastic imagery and descriptions. Easily hits close to home. The connections between the saying at the ...
Jan 9, 2014 -
Re: never, i pray
hello there, Isha contrary to what you thought this is actually very very good! one thing just a basic to start off, make sure you capitalize!!! every "I" should be ...
Jan 7, 2014 -
Re: A Person
hello there, leahwoodhouse. i liked this poem, the description was right on. it talks about how everyone is the same, yet we are all so different. it is very short. ...
Jan 1, 2014 -
Re: Frost and flame
hey there Laure! i really enjoyed reading this work. i love the description you used. my favorite lines were "While the skeleton dances Let us watch the chances Of the ...
Dec 31, 2013 -
Re: Roses and Chocolate
oh my...this is outstanding. i really love what you did with the piece. shivers, everywhere! like ulala8 said, the sensory and imagery is magnificient! i really feel as if I ...
Dec 31, 2013 -
Re: One Last 'Hurrah!'
hello there, therealme i really loved this poem. It was a great work to read to finish out the year. most of what i habe to say is good i ...
Dec 31, 2013 -
Re: Sight
hey Aley, oh... my... goodness.....this is.... craaazzzy good. its been a very long time since i read a poem like this. i dont think i have any bad things to ...
Dec 31, 2013 -
Re: Pixie
hello, Sinaryn! first off, this work is wonderfully thought out! It was a very very interesting read. I really liked the part where you said "I smile sadly beside your ...
Dec 30, 2013 -
Re: Death Anthem
Ello again, Bloodinkseesfootage, I want to comment on the familiarity. This piece sounds just like something I would write! The dark, underlying meaning is what my poetic mind LIVES FOR. ...
Dec 30, 2013 -
Re: Two Year Old Attempt At Some Sort of Song
Ello! :) This is a great song... I wish there was more to it! I would like to ask, what is your inspiration for it? Also, there's no rhyme that ...
Dec 30, 2013
