Published December 30, 2013
My heart would break
If not for you
My sweet, innocent child
Whom I protect
I would die for you
But I shall not live for you
Whilst we can still be together
I’ve no need to depart
Alas we all will
That will be a sad time
And you’ll move on
And where will I go?
It is my time
And it is also yours
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This is so sweet! xD
beautiful
Ello!
This is a great song... I wish there was more to it!
I would like to ask, what is your inspiration for it?
Also, there's no rhyme that I can see, but it works for this piece.
My favorite part of it was
"I would die for you
But I shall not live for you"
Sorry I have to cut this short...talk soon!
I barely remember what the inspiration for this piece was, something to do with the relationship between a mother and child, disintegrating.
Glad you liked it.