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Two Year Old Attempt At Some Sort of Song

by Renard
  • December 30, 2013
  • Lyrics
  • Romantic · Realistic

My heart would break

If not for you

My sweet, innocent child

Whom I protect

I would die for you

But I shall not live for you

Whilst we can still be together

I’ve no need to depart

Alas we all will

That will be a sad time

And you’ll move on

And where will I go?

It is my time

And it is also yours

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therealme
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therealme wrote a review · Tue Dec 31, 2013 11:15 am

This is so sweet! xD

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CamorynAnn
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CamorynAnn wrote a review · Tue Dec 31, 2013 2:33 am

Ello! :)
This is a great song... I wish there was more to it!

I would like to ask, what is your inspiration for it?

Also, there's no rhyme that I can see, but it works for this piece.

My favorite part of it was

"I would die for you

But I shall not live for you"

Sorry I have to cut this short...talk soon!


Renard
Renard replied · Tue Dec 31, 2013 9:37 am

I barely remember what the inspiration for this piece was, something to do with the relationship between a mother and child, disintegrating.
Glad you liked it. :)



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