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Re: My Sister's Skin is Darker Than Mine
Hello, TheblackSheep! I really love this piece. It is something I have gone through in my own life and I could relate very easily. My favorite part was this section: ...
Mar 18, 2015 -
Re: piano
Hello, Nightcrawler! I used to play piano all the time, but I have not had time in quite a while. This poem brought back many beautiful memories. I loved reading ...
Mar 16, 2015 -
Re: The Boy Who hated Lefties
Hello DrFeelGood, I'm Cam, it's review time! I've been gone awhile so be patient here. I absolutely loved this work. I made me smile and laugh as I read it. ...
Feb 10, 2015 -
Re: your blood is whiskey
Dear SparkToFlame, Wow!!! This is so good! After a rather long leave of absence from YWS it was nice to come back and find something truly exceptional in the featured. ...
Oct 16, 2014 -
Re: Papercuts
Hello there, Monster, This was an amazing piece and I could relate to it very very easily. You perfectly captured some of the complicated feelings that I have almost every ...
May 7, 2014 -
Re: Waking Up (Sucks)
Hello there, Gingahcakes, THIS WAS PERFECT! I read it while my ginger friend was writing a comic for class on a super hero named Nap Girl. We died laughing. It ...
May 7, 2014 -
Re: Call Me Sober
Hello there, Tenyo, This piece was absolutely riveting. I liked how you were never fond of the car. calling it "some great beast" in the very first stanza. You foreshadowed ...
May 6, 2014 -
Re: outlines of words better left unsaid
Hello there, Iggy, This is my favorite poem that I have read in a long time. It is almost as if you took the thoughts straight out of my mind, ...
May 1, 2014 -
Re: the secret garden
Hello there, Iggy! I really loved this piece!!!! It was so well thought out, and i loved the topics. I love the idea of the garden. The use of flowers ...
May 1, 2014 -
Re: They tell me to be happy, and I am happy
Hello there, Deanie, I enjoyed this piece, however, it was very long. In a few parts, I got a little bored with all of it. There was so much and ...
May 1, 2014 -
Re: Insomniac
Hello there, danickname, This is actually one of my favorite topics to discuss. By farrr. I love wondering what would happen to us if not everything we believed was actually ...
Apr 28, 2014 -
Re: Mirror
Hello there, BrittanyNicole. This work is very very good. I am extremely impressed. You captured quite well a good majority of the things that i think about and see when ...
Mar 5, 2014 -
Re: ma foraree
hello there pengtingking, this is.. i'm not sure. It is extremely hard to read. You use acronyms, you barely make sense at all. I don't think that this is very ...
Feb 20, 2014 -
Re: The inevitable
hello there, rhiasofia WOW!!! This is breathtaking! You did a perfect job capturing something so difficult. That fear of the end. It is so beautiful. my favorite lines were "But ...
Feb 11, 2014 -
Re: Nicola
Hello there, Aquareed, Wow. This is fantastic. You have a very very wonderfully amazing gift for describing. Every line tells us more about your friend. I was able to come ...
Feb 11, 2014
