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CamorynAnn

CamorynAnn

  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: My Sister's Skin is Darker Than Mine

    Hello, TheblackSheep! I really love this piece. It is something I have gone through in my own life and I could relate very easily. My favorite part was this section: ...

    Mar 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: piano

    Hello, Nightcrawler! I used to play piano all the time, but I have not had time in quite a while. This poem brought back many beautiful memories. I loved reading ...

    Mar 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, Dramatic Re: The Boy Who hated Lefties

    Hello DrFeelGood, I'm Cam, it's review time! I've been gone awhile so be patient here. I absolutely loved this work. I made me smile and laugh as I read it. ...

    Feb 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: your blood is whiskey

    Dear SparkToFlame, Wow!!! This is so good! After a rather long leave of absence from YWS it was nice to come back and find something truly exceptional in the featured. ...

    Oct 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Papercuts

    Hello there, Monster, This was an amazing piece and I could relate to it very very easily. You perfectly captured some of the complicated feelings that I have almost every ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Waking Up (Sucks)

    Hello there, Gingahcakes, THIS WAS PERFECT! I read it while my ginger friend was writing a comic for class on a super hero named Nap Girl. We died laughing. It ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Call Me Sober

    Hello there, Tenyo, This piece was absolutely riveting. I liked how you were never fond of the car. calling it "some great beast" in the very first stanza. You foreshadowed ...

    May 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: outlines of words better left unsaid

    Hello there, Iggy, This is my favorite poem that I have read in a long time. It is almost as if you took the thoughts straight out of my mind, ...

    May 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: the secret garden

    Hello there, Iggy! I really loved this piece!!!! It was so well thought out, and i loved the topics. I love the idea of the garden. The use of flowers ...

    May 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: They tell me to be happy, and I am happy

    Hello there, Deanie, I enjoyed this piece, however, it was very long. In a few parts, I got a little bored with all of it. There was so much and ...

    May 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Insomniac

    Hello there, danickname, This is actually one of my favorite topics to discuss. By farrr. I love wondering what would happen to us if not everything we believed was actually ...

    Apr 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mirror

    Hello there, BrittanyNicole. This work is very very good. I am extremely impressed. You captured quite well a good majority of the things that i think about and see when ...

    Mar 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Science Fiction, Technology Re: ma foraree

    hello there pengtingking, this is.. i'm not sure. It is extremely hard to read. You use acronyms, you barely make sense at all. I don't think that this is very ...

    Feb 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The inevitable

    hello there, rhiasofia WOW!!! This is breathtaking! You did a perfect job capturing something so difficult. That fear of the end. It is so beautiful. my favorite lines were "But ...

    Feb 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Nicola

    Hello there, Aquareed, Wow. This is fantastic. You have a very very wonderfully amazing gift for describing. Every line tells us more about your friend. I was able to come ...

    Feb 11, 2014


You know that place between sleep and awake, that place where you still remember dreaming? That’s where I’ll always love you. That’s where I’ll be waiting.
— J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan