Cameron

Monkey, There are of course many ways to interpret a poem. With regards to your third comment, I rather like the way I phrased this verse, and if you want ...

RoseEmma, I congratulate you on channelling your emotions in a productive manner, but if you are simply writing for therapeutic reasons, and have no interest in improving your work, you ...

That was something for sure. I especially enjoyed the dialogue between the two "characters" in the poem.

Words fall short of a poem that defies expression lol

I don't know why some of you have to be so critical. I mean of course no poem, or anything for that matter will ever be perfect, but this has ...

What did you, did you not like about it?

Just out of curiosity...Why did you abandon Christianity?

Wow...maybe a little bit of touching up here and there...but otherwise there were some beautiful stanzas. Way to use imaginative metaphorical verses to get the point across. Well done.

Sounds to me like you might be venting...but I guess for the majority of writers (myself included) poetry is used as a means to channel emotion in a productive way. ...