Published August 9, 2006
Nothing can rival my first piece of magnificence, but this comes close.
I like sharks
I like sharks
And money
And money
I'm so rich
I own a shark
Someday
I'm going to overtake
Animal Planet
And make
SHARK YEAR
Because Shark Week
Will never suffice
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every year should be shark year! very cute and enjoyable
As for the fact you say I have a lot to learn? It is you, in fact, who is out of place, telling the man who grew up during the French Revolution that he has a lot to learn. You're quite correct it is nice to have me here.
Well Imp, one can hardly crit brilliance...
Lol, you've got a LOT to learn, Sharty... But *struggles* but... I suppose it's nice to have you on board... *head/desk*
As for this piece, it was amusing, a quick read-through, but uhhh... I wouldn't exactly call it masterpiece, man...
I refer you simply to my other post on a similar topic. While you're there, please read Dream Deep's as well.
Poor_Imp's right; there's nothing else to say.
Perhaps saying he and I are friends is a falsehood, for in truth, I thought he was rather cocky. And he did better than I in college! He cheated!
Ah. Well then, good luck with the ...poetry and all that that implies. ^_^
I don't think there's anything else to say; unless you've decided you'd like to have all your magnifecence read and critiqued.
He didn't like sharks!
I happen to be friends with Oscar Wilde.
You're not channeling Oscar Wilde by any chance, are you, Sharty? Not that he had a shark infatuation...
Isn't the time it takes to read, think over, and critique a piece of art the highest form admiration? ^_~
Don’t you tell me what channel Shark Week is on! Don't forget who I am--the shark expert! i think I know what channel Shark Week is shown on. It's definitely not Discovery channel.
By the way, are you critiquing me?!! I did not come to this site to be critiqued, but to be admired! I suppose this is a rather cliché saying, but it has come time for me to admit it to myself: I am truly misunderstood. But isn’t that true for all artists?
Words fall short of a poem that defies expression lol
............ I like/love sharks too... and I never thought about making a shark year...
I'm not rich though...
(Oh well I love sharks and money too, it's awesome)
I like sharks
I like sharks
And money
And money
I'm so rich
I own a shark
Someday
I'm going to overtake
Animal Planet
And make
SHARK YEAR
Because Shark Week
Will never suffice
Thats what you have
This is what it should be
I like sharks
I love sharks
And money
It's great
I'm so rich
I own a shark
And someday
I'm gunna overtake
Animal Planet
And create
SHARK YEAR
Because Shark Week
Don't cut it
Eh? eh? Whaddayathink?
Very nice work though Sharty.
Thats very...nice. Although Shark Week's on Discovery Channel, not Animal Planet. Very dramatic...yeah, 'cause when you said that stuff it was...dramatic.