Calamity

Hello there! I love anything deities/mythology, so this is right in my wheelhouse! I was instantly drawn in with the language you used throughout. The descriptions in the beginning hooked ...

Hello! Hopping in to leave a short review. I'm going to preface by saying that I'm not well versed in lyric/song writing, but from what I know about generic structuring ...

Hi daisyletters! I know this is out of the green room but I still wanted to share my thoughts :] I like the concept behind this being a glimpse into ...

Hello again! Back for another quick review. I admittedly have not read the other stories within this folder, so I may be missing some context. However, I thought I'd still ...

Hey creeperfeverdreams! The beginning really hooked me in. The depiction of the magical feeling in children's happiness was palpable in the way you described it, and I feel this whimsy ...

Hi SpunkyMonkey! Let's get into this review! I really enjoyed your word choice throughout. It felt intentional and illustrative - lots of descriptors to help paint each image. I especially ...

Hey labyrinthine! I love this! The speaker wastes no time to set the scene: the immediate jump into the poem with "it's the fact" lured me in and kept me ...

Hi AlexWrites! Hope you are doing well! This feels like a campfire story, which is fitting for the title! I like how the reader goes on a journey with the ...

Hello daisyletters! Saw this was still in the green room and figured I would give it a quick review! First off, I like the title! Not only the fun nod ...

Hi floodlights! Always a gift to get more poetry from you!

Hello Flooding, You have a lot of striking imagery here. I'm in love with your usage of language; some notable phrases to me include "the saints are soft / with ...

Hi LadyBug! Exploring the idea of the passage of time through love/loss is powerful. Coffee getting cold, flowers dying, cutting hair. I think they're all great images of how time ...

floodlights! I love a listed-format poem. Really, I love any kind of prose poetry, and this especially is gorgeous for its use of syntax. Beginning nearly ever sentence with "to" ...

Hi FireEyes! I really like the softness of this poem. Any sort of romantic piece lends itself to that tone well, but I think paired with the sun imagery there's ...

Hi redhood! I love a good nature-focused poem! The focus specifically on forestry was appealing to me -- I think there are a lot of ways you can use a ...