Cailey

This is pretty awesome. I love how you managed to make it sound simple and clear, but so full of feeling. I also think that this would make a very ...

Like Demib said, it isn't quite my style. Personally I would have liked it to flow better and hold some more detail, but it was good. And, yes, prayer is ...

Heyo! CaiJo here to review for you. :) So, first of all, I liked it. Biggest complaint is some typos and grammar stuff. Specifically you wrote too where it should ...

I love it!!

Nice! I don't have a very good actual review, but I love the story behind the poem! The rhythm and flow felt weird in some places, so you should read ...

Heyo, this is Cailey here to review you! :) First of all, I liked it! It made me laugh for some reason, and that is a compliment. :) You spelled ...

I agree, add an introduction that ties in with the conclusion. Also, punctuation in the first stanza, I thought you meant people never knew friendships. So, you could clear that ...

This is very simple, which could be a bad thing if you were going for something deep, but I liked it. The first stanza was best, the second didn't catch ...

Love it! I was hoping to give a good review, but am tired and couldn't find anything to correct you on. I felt the emotion, and it did feel a ...

thanks for the reviews, I did go back and fix the stuff you pointed out. Glad you liked it!!

yes, PM me when you have the rest, please?

Wow, I have no review. this is really sad and sweet and well written. No mistakes that I caught. I just had to say something.

Hey, I have posted the rest of this story! Please read all of it, the story is better if it's all together. Click on the view novel page and you ...

thanks for the reviews and differing opinions. :)

Hilarious!! :) I agree, post on youtube!! :D