Cailey

Good job, I have one comment. Here: "The song whispers along my fingers, Never stirring from their journey." It isn't clear if your second line is referring to the song ...

So, I think this could use more. Detail, Imagery, metaphors, all those literary terms you learn in English class. Make us feel your heart. I do, but most likely it's ...

this was good, I liked your parrallel structure. they made the whole thing better somehow. :D they way each stanza was set up exactly the same. And it flowed well, ...

Yeah, as I Christian I'm not sure I like this. It was very well written, and I admire your effort. I wouldn't say this is offensive, I just don't completely ...

I had to read this twice, it didn't make sense the first time. After the second, I think I understand. the girl abandoned him too, right? It was a sad ...

I love it! this was so sweet and simple and true. I especially love your ending. there is an ending for you. It was so cool, and inspiring in a ...

Good job! I have a few comments on this, but for the most part it is a very well done piece of work. I can't wait until this song is ...

Like it! And Biome is a word, I just learned it in Biology. :) Anyway, I loved the repetition. It was a very good poem, and felt.. refreshing? Not sure ...

I'm hurt i don't want this pain Before anything, why in the world are your I's not capitalized??? that just took away from the whole poem and was soooo distracting! ...

Wow! Very dark and creepy! Was this a real nightmare? I have a few nitpicks, but not much. First, you wrote there where you should have had their. And you ...

this was inveresting. I like it. But, you NEED paragraphs! It's really hard to read a huge chunk of writing like this. It just makes the story so much better ...

this was great. I can't think of much of a review to give you. It was already simple enough. You had good rhyming, your rhythm was good (although there were ...

Woah. this is great. I am wondering about the story behind this. But I like that you don't tell everything. You leave it up to the reader to figure out ...

So, this was good, but I think you should work on the flow. It felt too broken up, too fragmented. Your stanzas all felt incomplete, like you ended them too ...

Before anyThing I need To apologize for my capiTal Ts. My key is broken, and The only way I can geT a T is if I copy and pasTe one. ...