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Cailey

Cailey

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: Elder-Chapter 1 (Preview)

    Alright, so I'm here for your review. :) I liked this, it's really interesting and I wish I had time to go through and look at the rest of your ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Loneliness

    Ah! I like this! I started reading and was like, eh.. but then I kept reading and was like, yeah!. :D I like, what's it called, parasyndeton?, where you leave ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Politics, Humor Re: The Cow Movement- let???s spread the cud around

    Alright, let's try this again. :)

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Ode to a Sleeping Train

    Hey there, Cailey here to review for you! :) Alright, so first of all this was pretty amazing. It always catches me off guard when I find writers like you ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Writing

    Hey there, Cailey here for reviewing! (I'm attempting to review for all members of the red team. Wish me luck!) Okay, so this was short and sweet, which is good. ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: Chapter 3. (Animal Politics)

    Hey there, Cailey here, on a mission to give at least on review to all the Red Team members. Who knows if I'll suceed. :) Anyway, this was interesting. I ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Memories up in the Attic

    Hello, there! I am here to review. :D First of all, this is sweet. It has a sad tone, even though we don't know exactly what happened or who she ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Other » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: All Because of Him

    Description!! That is my first and foremost advice for you, here. You need much more description. Don't tell us what's happening, show us. (If you haven't heard this, you will ...

    Feb 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Ballad of Jazz

    Hello! I'm here with the promised review. :) Although, I have to said my first reaction was just to say this is amazing and there's no reviewing left to do. ...

    Feb 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: If Ever

    Hello, I am here for a review. :) Nice poem, overall I liked it; it's sweet and short and cute. I do have a few nitpits, though, so bear with ...

    Feb 16, 2013
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Spiritual Re: Broken Jar (Rewritten)

    Woah. I'm speechless, except, I'm going to try and find words anyway, because this was wonderful and deserves a good review. I tried really hard to find things to critique, ...

    Feb 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: An Angel's Lullaby

    Alright, I'm here for your review! :) Okay, so before anything this was sweet. I like it, you have a nice trick for writing. :) The first line is important, ...

    Feb 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Literature Re: The Artist

    So, this time I actually read the review you already had. :) This way I can avoid saying the same things. I do agree with dogs that this could use ...

    Feb 12, 2013
  • Script » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Untitled

    Alright, so this is my first review of a script, hopefully I don't make a fool of myself. :D I was thinking through this as though I were performing it ...

    Feb 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The Life Of a Raindrop

    Okay, I found it!! And, since you went through all the trouble to ask me for a review, I will try my best to give a good review. Maybe you ...

    Feb 8, 2013


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