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Cailey

Cailey

  • Poetry » General, General Re: My own problems with ADD

    Hello! Cailey here to review even though it's always ages between my YWS visits and reviews. I decided to do some reviewing today though and I am glad I did ...

    May 15, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Deleted 69

    Hey there, Cailey here with a review. First of all, I love love love love the beginning. Those first two sections were like a punch in the gut in the ...

    Oct 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Satire Re: Ace Cake

    Hey! Cailey here for a review. I should definitely be doing homework right now, but procrastination by editing is probably okay? Anyway, looks like GreatKing was able to catch the ...

    Sep 23, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Free

    This is about swimming right? Like, it seems really obvious but since it's not outright said I'm a little worried that I could be totally wrong in which case my ...

    Aug 4, 2016
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Flames of Hell

    Heyo! Cailey here with a review! So this is pretty long so I'll give some general comments and hope you can work with them. :) I think that something that ...

    Mar 28, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: You and Me and Infinity

    Hey! Cailey here to review. It's been way too long since I've reviewed (it's always been too long since I've reviewed. Sigh) but I love poetry and have some free ...

    Mar 4, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Potatoe Fanfic (2BeeContinued)

    Not sure if this was meant as a serious piece to actually be reviewed? If it is, grammar and spelling and all needs a lot of work. It's okay to ...

    Nov 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Literature Re: I've Reserved For You

    Heyo, Cailey here to review. (Sidenote. I'm taking Japanese II in college this semester and I was like, oh, maybe I can actually read the Japanese! And I got all ...

    Nov 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Delete

    Yo yo yo. I'm jumping in at the end of review day to give you some feedback. First off, I had to read this twice because the first time through ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Emotion

    Yes! Yes! This is beautiful. I came to give a review but it will be hard to review this. I got so caught up in the story that I forgot ...

    Sep 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Damn Near Burnt

    Woah! Love this. Crazy burst of so much in so few words. First of all, can I just say that I love the first line. Beautiful, and you do such ...

    Sep 23, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Why must we fight?

    Heyo! Cailey here to review. It's been way too long since I wrote a review or even wandered around the site, so I'm super excited to have time tonight to ...

    Sep 23, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Rabbit Heart: 1

    Hello, Cailey here to review. So I read the description and wasn't sure what to expect. I kind of thought it would be a cheesy sort of kids' story and ...

    May 17, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Sea Foam

    Hello, I am here to review this (as you mentioned in the description) sad story. First of all I want to say that I love your descriptions of the beach. ...

    May 17, 2015
  • Other » Narrative, Realistic Re: Wal-mart ain't too fun

    Hey, Cailey here with a review! So I've never worked at Wal-Mart or any big grocery store, but this is exactly how I imagine it must be sometimes. I think ...

    Apr 22, 2015


You can cut all the flowers, but you cannot stop Spring from coming.
— Pablo Neruda