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Re: My own problems with ADD
Hello! Cailey here to review even though it's always ages between my YWS visits and reviews. I decided to do some reviewing today though and I am glad I did ...
May 15, 2017 -
Re: Deleted 69
Hey there, Cailey here with a review. First of all, I love love love love the beginning. Those first two sections were like a punch in the gut in the ...
Oct 21, 2016 -
Re: Ace Cake
Hey! Cailey here for a review. I should definitely be doing homework right now, but procrastination by editing is probably okay? Anyway, looks like GreatKing was able to catch the ...
Sep 23, 2016 -
Re: Free
This is about swimming right? Like, it seems really obvious but since it's not outright said I'm a little worried that I could be totally wrong in which case my ...
Aug 4, 2016 -
Re: Flames of Hell
Heyo! Cailey here with a review! So this is pretty long so I'll give some general comments and hope you can work with them. :) I think that something that ...
Mar 28, 2016 -
Re: You and Me and Infinity
Hey! Cailey here to review. It's been way too long since I've reviewed (it's always been too long since I've reviewed. Sigh) but I love poetry and have some free ...
Mar 4, 2016 -
Re: Potatoe Fanfic (2BeeContinued)
Not sure if this was meant as a serious piece to actually be reviewed? If it is, grammar and spelling and all needs a lot of work. It's okay to ...
Nov 12, 2015 -
Re: I've Reserved For You
Heyo, Cailey here to review. (Sidenote. I'm taking Japanese II in college this semester and I was like, oh, maybe I can actually read the Japanese! And I got all ...
Nov 12, 2015 -
Re: Delete
Yo yo yo. I'm jumping in at the end of review day to give you some feedback. First off, I had to read this twice because the first time through ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Emotion
Yes! Yes! This is beautiful. I came to give a review but it will be hard to review this. I got so caught up in the story that I forgot ...
Sep 23, 2015 -
Re: Damn Near Burnt
Woah! Love this. Crazy burst of so much in so few words. First of all, can I just say that I love the first line. Beautiful, and you do such ...
Sep 23, 2015 -
Re: Why must we fight?
Heyo! Cailey here to review. It's been way too long since I wrote a review or even wandered around the site, so I'm super excited to have time tonight to ...
Sep 23, 2015 -
Re: Rabbit Heart: 1
Hello, Cailey here to review. So I read the description and wasn't sure what to expect. I kind of thought it would be a cheesy sort of kids' story and ...
May 17, 2015 -
Re: Sea Foam
Hello, I am here to review this (as you mentioned in the description) sad story. First of all I want to say that I love your descriptions of the beach. ...
May 17, 2015 -
Re: Wal-mart ain't too fun
Hey, Cailey here with a review! So I've never worked at Wal-Mart or any big grocery store, but this is exactly how I imagine it must be sometimes. I think ...
Apr 22, 2015
