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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Demonic Flare Chapter 2: Meeting with a Moon Goddess

    Well hello there, here to review your second chapter, as promised! Alright, my first impression: again, this is good, and a pleasant read. There's more description in this piece as ...

    Dec 19, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Demonic Flare Chapter 1: Stuck with a Beast

    Hey ElementalBlood. Firstly, I'd like to say that I quite enjoyed reading this. I haven't found a gaming story like this one in ages, since I first read Hyperversum. Overall, ...

    Dec 19, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Supernatural Re: Sparks: Chapter One

    Hey TLT, Ita here to review. I agree with Lycando, I'm not sure if this was done deliberately or a YWS formatting error, but if the former, please, please edit ...

    Dec 14, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Allegiance- Chapter Two: Chase

    Allllpha!

    Dec 14, 2012
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: .

    Heyo MM, Captain Crazy to the review~ By now I think I've figured out when you say novel, you don't mean novel, per say, but extracts. Because this really doesn't ...

    Dec 7, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Cadence~ Part One of One: Out of Darkness

    Threnody hiiii it's been so long! Well, yeah, while I don't usually read sci-fi, I quite liked this. It was really well-written, as all your pieces. You managed, I think, ...

    Nov 18, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Forgotten: Chapter One

    Heya Pix, as promised, Ita here to review. Again, let me start off by saying I couldn't spot any grammatical errors in this, so kudos to you. Now, onto the ...

    Nov 17, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Other Re: Coffee and Cocaine

    Heya Riese, as promised, I'm here to review this. So, yeah, um. This is good. I enjoyed reading it a good bit. I'm curious to know what happens next. However, ...

    Nov 17, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: J&R- Chapter One

    So, uh, hi, Pix. Ita here to review, since I haven't reviewed anything properly in a while. I will take advantage of this piece to discuss about your characters, call ...

    Nov 16, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Red Winter

    Heya RiesePiecey, Ita here to review. Man, I love when pieces like these pop up. They show that there's always a write around willing to do the unconventional. You never ...

    Nov 16, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: True Life Intro

    Uh, hey, Vanilla. Ita here to review. My first impression after reading this was, well, I don't know. There are many, many angsty teen stories around, and this one doesn't ...

    Nov 14, 2012
  • Other » Science Fiction, Technology Re: Sailing Sol

    Hey Skyy! Welcome to YWS! I was asked to review this, so here I am. It's an interesting piece of flash fiction, though, I don't really get the genre. Isn't ...

    Nov 14, 2012
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The House Up On Top The Hill

    Hey there Shenshi, here to review as requested. “The House up on top the hill is none a thing to trifle with dear boy.” The eager old miser imparted with ...

    Oct 3, 2012
  • Other » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: The Diary

    Heyy Alex! I must say, I don't read horror, but this is definitely a horror short, or at least, trying to be. When I read through the events, 'Poe' was ...

    Sep 27, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: La Tua Voce Gioca

    Ciao Gee~ Mi hai chiesto una recensione in Italiano, percio eccomi qua xD Sto scrivendo da un compiuter americano, percio ci saranno degli errori con gli accenti (cioe, non posso ...

    Sep 26, 2012


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