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Re: Demonic Flare Chapter 2: Meeting with a Moon Goddess
Well hello there, here to review your second chapter, as promised! Alright, my first impression: again, this is good, and a pleasant read. There's more description in this piece as ...
Dec 19, 2012 -
Re: Demonic Flare Chapter 1: Stuck with a Beast
Hey ElementalBlood. Firstly, I'd like to say that I quite enjoyed reading this. I haven't found a gaming story like this one in ages, since I first read Hyperversum. Overall, ...
Dec 19, 2012 -
Re: Sparks: Chapter One
Hey TLT, Ita here to review. I agree with Lycando, I'm not sure if this was done deliberately or a YWS formatting error, but if the former, please, please edit ...
Dec 14, 2012 -
Re: Allegiance- Chapter Two: Chase
Allllpha!
Dec 14, 2012 -
Re: .
Heyo MM, Captain Crazy to the review~ By now I think I've figured out when you say novel, you don't mean novel, per say, but extracts. Because this really doesn't ...
Dec 7, 2012 -
Re: Cadence~ Part One of One: Out of Darkness
Threnody hiiii it's been so long! Well, yeah, while I don't usually read sci-fi, I quite liked this. It was really well-written, as all your pieces. You managed, I think, ...
Nov 18, 2012 -
Re: Forgotten: Chapter One
Heya Pix, as promised, Ita here to review. Again, let me start off by saying I couldn't spot any grammatical errors in this, so kudos to you. Now, onto the ...
Nov 17, 2012 -
Re: Coffee and Cocaine
Heya Riese, as promised, I'm here to review this. So, yeah, um. This is good. I enjoyed reading it a good bit. I'm curious to know what happens next. However, ...
Nov 17, 2012 -
Re: J&R- Chapter One
So, uh, hi, Pix. Ita here to review, since I haven't reviewed anything properly in a while. I will take advantage of this piece to discuss about your characters, call ...
Nov 16, 2012 -
Re: Red Winter
Heya RiesePiecey, Ita here to review. Man, I love when pieces like these pop up. They show that there's always a write around willing to do the unconventional. You never ...
Nov 16, 2012 -
Re: True Life Intro
Uh, hey, Vanilla. Ita here to review. My first impression after reading this was, well, I don't know. There are many, many angsty teen stories around, and this one doesn't ...
Nov 14, 2012 -
Re: Sailing Sol
Hey Skyy! Welcome to YWS! I was asked to review this, so here I am. It's an interesting piece of flash fiction, though, I don't really get the genre. Isn't ...
Nov 14, 2012 -
Re: The House Up On Top The Hill
Hey there Shenshi, here to review as requested. “The House up on top the hill is none a thing to trifle with dear boy.” The eager old miser imparted with ...
Oct 3, 2012 -
Re: The Diary
Heyy Alex! I must say, I don't read horror, but this is definitely a horror short, or at least, trying to be. When I read through the events, 'Poe' was ...
Sep 27, 2012 -
Re: La Tua Voce Gioca
Ciao Gee~ Mi hai chiesto una recensione in Italiano, percio eccomi qua xD Sto scrivendo da un compiuter americano, percio ci saranno degli errori con gli accenti (cioe, non posso ...
Sep 26, 2012
