Caerulean

Hey there. :) I didn't think that you'd really make a continuation since the first one was posted in Romantic Short Stories. lol Anyway, I've got nitpicks for you: He ...

Maybe it was maybe it wasn’t, we will - I suggest putting a comma after 'Maybe it was', or maybe a period. I noticed a few other missing punctuations but ...

Wow, this is really epic! :D It was totally fun to read. Nitpicks/Comments: But I liked it. No, no I didn’t. Yes, yes I did. Oh for God’s sake! - ...

Hi! I've got some nitpicks for you: and looses its meaning. - Typo: 'loses' Your eyes,when you look at me - You forgot to put a space after the comma. ...

Hey, there! :D So, here we go again. Nitpicks: ...yakking as his several chins vibrated. - 'several chins'? “You will have a ten minute brake at eleven..." - I think, ...

If I would take this seriously, I would mention the mistakes I noticed. But, since this is the Cute War of the Ages, I'll let it through xD. :D This ...

You did an epic job with this poem and I'm loving the last 2 lines! :D - But maybe even the moon, Has reasons to die. Anyway, here we go: ...

Yay! New chapter! :D Nitpicks: “He’s talking to a friend. He’ll be here in minute.” - You forgot to put 'a' before 'minute'. I flicked my eyes to the tall ...

Ooh. The first reviewer was quite harsh xD. I don't know if I should really agree with him 'cause I'm not really good at commenting on poems and I'm not ...

o.o The first time I read this, I was like 'Whoah.' You've got a lot of vocabulary in you. I didn't understand the poem xD. But then, when I read ...

Yay, new chapter! :D Nitpicks: (Maybe, the other reviewers have already caught these but, oh well...) Her steps echo off the walls and she wearing her scrubs with a white ...

Hey, wasabey!! :D Another poem of yours got featured again! You're awesome! XD By the way, the poem is nice. :) There were some parts that sounded a little bit ...

Hey there, Skins! :D I'm here. :) Nitpicks: What would he say if anyone came in? I just wanted to check the windowsill for mould and dead bugs? He certainly ...

I have one word for you: Wow. This is really a great poem and I'm lovin' it xD. The message is epic. :D *thumbs up all the way to Heaven* ...

Haha, this is really cool! I love jingles xD (I mean songs that are changed for school programs or something). :D I sang from the beginning to the chorus part ...