Cadi

Hey there, aliveandsurviving, So, from your opening blurb-bit, it seems to me that you have quite an interesting concept and plot for this story; however, there are a few things ...

Hey there, DD, I'm here to take a look at this, like I offered in chat. You said you felt the chapters were too short, so I'll try and focus ...

Hey there, Raelyn, I see from the comments below that you've had a review on this piece, but lost it in the Great Database Crash, so I'll do my best ...

Hey there, Whisp, You've got an interesting idea here - a shield that falls apart at the touch of poison is a new one on me, and your character seems ...

Hey there, MichaelRanOutOfUsers, So, I reviewed this piece earlier today, and then the site crashed and took out a massive chunk of database, so here I am to review it ...

Hey there, Izzy, I love the theme of this poem, and the conclusion of it - I, too, always have music in my head, and it's a wonderful thing. Also, ...

Hey there, Youngwriter82, There's an awful lot going on in this short piece! From what I can gather, Warriorflame is having a dream about a battle, then he wakes from ...

Hey there, mithrim, I don't know if your competition is over by now, but I figured I'd write you a review anyway - even if it's too late for this ...

Hey there, BaByLa, There are a few things I'd like to say about this piece that I think might help improve it, so without further ado... To start with, the ...

Hey there, CoT, You've painted an interesting scene here. It's sometimes very nice to read something that's just a single scene, capturing a moment without a great deal of action. ...

Hi there, Anzius, This seems to have been sitting around neglected for some time, but hopefully I will be able to give it some helpful attention and suggest some things ...

Hey there, wakegirl, I'd like to start by saying that I really like the first half of this piece. The first two and a half paragraphs set up the scene ...

Hey there, Lantern, I'd like to start by saying this is an interesting scene, like a snapshot of a character's life, which is pretty cool. It's not packed with action, ...

Hey there, future, Now, poetry isn't really 'my thing', so I'm going to try and make some helpful comments, but I can't promise they'll be anything particularly expert or insightful. ...

Heyhi Ten :) So, I dun' really do that poetry thing much, but all your reviews so far seem to be "you rhyme and that's bad", so I thought I'd ...