CJeanene13

Wow, you left me hanging! Darn. I really was getting into it. I enjoyed that a lot. I really want to read more. Anyways, for the help. I don't know ...

I loved it. It is one of those poems that expresses how I feel. It was amazing. I loved the ending. It looks like all that I caught has already ...

Oh wow. I thought that was one of the most amazing things i have ever read. I am so hooked onto it and it has such a great vocabulary. I ...

I am so not going to say anything negative, because I bet most of that is above. But I am going to say that I am completely hooked to this ...

Wow, I couldn't believe how much I could relate to the prologue. I feel that way too. I want a guy to like me so badly, because I like him. ...

I also noticed what the others noticed. So I don't have any mistakes for you to correct, besides those mentioned above. One thing I noticed is that probably by accident ...

I really like the beginning, but it started to get a little weird. Especially after the first swear word started flying. I like the beginning, but it got a little ...

I could see the longing of the person, feel their emotion. It was very well done. I agree with the comments made above, except that I haven't had a boyfriend ...

I love the emotion that is in this poem. It is very true and very overwhelming. I felt amazed at the emotion the tension. It was very well done. I ...

I liked the feeling of it. I too, have wanted a really cute high school romance or a fairy tale ending. Its true that it can happen in reality. I ...

Wow, very, very expressive. It is sad. But I really liked the emotion and description. You needs capitals when you begin a new sentence. And here are some things I ...

Wow, amazing poem. I think that was amazing. The poem painted wonderful and intriguing images in my head. The song was clear. I felt at peace. This an amazing poem, ...

Wow, that was good. It was short, simple, and full of tons of meaning. You just need a capital W on the first line on Why. Thats about all I ...

The first thing I caught was 'Across from me was the computer desk where a purple glitter lamp sat, I forgot to turn the thing off last night again.' So ...

Wow, it caught me. There is the mistake "abnormally clam" so just the spelling. I agree with the above comments and expanding a little. It was very good so far. ...