CJ6233

Hi, I'm here to review your work! So I noticed that there isn't a lot for me to review here so let's start on that! Your poem is short, and ...

Hi! I just want to say, I hope this went good for you at school, and this seems so cool! I like the second part and especially the way it ...

Hi! I was not really sure what I expected when I clicked on this after reading the description but it definitely was not this. Although this is good, I feel ...

This is really good! I don't have a lot to say about it really, but I just want to point out the line 'conquered by the merciless grip of death' ...

This is interesting. It kind of made me laugh, not trying to sound rude but I think that’s a good thing because it makes it less morbid. There’s a sense ...

Hi, I'm here to review your poem! First of all like the idea. Second of all, I think 'Because thinking' should have a lower 'b'? Maybe when you say 'I ...

Is this finished? If it is it's kind of an abrupt ending, I'm uncertain of what's going on but your choice of words is lovely. If it isn't finished, it ...

Hi, i'm not here to do any help on your work, so if you wish to move on from this that's ok, but I wanted to say something about the ...

Wow. I was just coming out of reading a poem and decided to click on this, and I do not regret it. This poem is great and obviously just easy ...

Hi! It's CJ6233 here to leave you a review! ... that was corny ok moving on, I really like this poem because it's true and there is nothing that can ...

Hi! It's me CJ6233, I saw on your profile you needed a review, and I know you already have one but I thought because you helped me I should return ...

I love this as I feel like my friend group doesn't actually like me, I missed days off school so I could avoid being with them because I believed if ...

I love this so much! I have a sibling who is bisexual and was afraid of coming out because he thought we wouldn't accept him and we told him we ...

Heart touching, really felt the emotions of the person. I love the metopher and the way you used the rose to describe the emotion. Definitely inspirational. As said in a ...