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Nice piece.. especially if you don't do much poetry. I would recommend adding some more punctuation in the lines themselves (not at the ends of them), and maybe reducing some ...

I really enjoyed this piece, but there were some things that kind of irked me. First of all, the opening. It's been mentioned in previous reviews, but I just want ...

This was a nice piece, but I think it could be improved in several ways: the rhythm was a bit off in the first half of the piece, as the ...

I really enjoyed this... it's really interesting that you did both sides of that situation.. it's said that you can't fully interpret or understand the actions of another until you ...

This was EXCELLENT. And that is not something I say often. The trains of thought were so realistic, so well expressed, so concise and THOUGHT like... streams of feeling and ...

Nice introduction.. I would try to remember that this a letter though. You have to be consistent with the structure of the writing... you would not include details like eye ...

Well first of all, I wouldn't really call it a poem, but an interesting thought. Second.. it's totally ambiguous. It can be that two people never stay together, and eventually ...

A piece by itself, without any explanation, this was a bit random. A bit too random for me. HOWEVER, with the knowledge that there was a prompt behind it, I ...

This didn't have a great flow for me... it was a good piece, and I like the thought behind it.. the metaphor of losing handholds was nice.. but I think ...

Your piece as it is beautiful, with gorgeous imagery, great concept. There's one major problem: It's super choppy because of where you've spaced it. If you were to space it ...

I really liked this piece... the imagery was gorgeous and the statement strong. At first, I thought it was like.. a haiku sequence or something, until I counted out the ...

I recently wrote a tanka using this exact metaphor, but with the exact opposite outlook, haha. All mended mirrors Never rid of all the cracks. Some things are just gone ...

A great piece.. there were some parts that could be fixed up, I think. Some small grammar and spelling errors/typos.. Otherwise, nice piece. I think that perhaps you could go ...

I would keep the capitalization, and I didn't notice the huge repetition of "wicked", so I would keep both of those. However, the punctuation felt a bit excessive to me, ...

This piece was good- but I think it could be improved. There is obviously a lot of description, and good description: however, I think that it kind of draws away ...