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Hi there... Loved this... the humor and imagery in it are great, and it's really concise... really nice job with this piece, haha. Awesome voice too. As Crimsona pointed out, ...

This was another excellent piece.. I don't know how you are able to convey so much vivid emotion in your words, but you do... great word choice and phrasing, again. ...

Hi there.. So, this piece was really interesting. I had to slow down, and take every word in, which doesn't happen to often. So Kudos to you. c: I absolutely ...

This piece has gorgeous imagery.. however, it was difficult for me to get into it, because in some places, it seemed more about the imagery than the workers. I like ...

Cutting is a tough topic, and a somewhat new one to poetry. This means, that when you write about it, it should be good. Really good. Original. And this is ...

I'm so sorry. :c I actually had a dog named Max when I was little.. I remember when he died, I was a mess.. a complete, sprawling mess of tears ...

Hi there- This was a beautiful piece... the repetition made it difficult to read, but when I was able to fully focus on the words, I was pleasantly surprised at ...

Hi there- So, I thought this had a nice and concise rhyming scheme, but it seemed to dominate the whole piece. Personally, I'm not a huge fan of rhyming, especially ...

Holy sh- uhh, cow. That was crazy good. I usually don't give reviews like this.. I can be quite harsh at times, I'm sorry to say. But that was beautifully ...

Hi there I THINK that I might go buy a pineapple, and try to tempt some minjas out of hiding. Mostly because I love their name. :) Great story... I ...

Hi there- Nice piece.. I myself have never been able to enjoy using a diary, so I gave it up, and just write other things instead. However, I know many ...

Hi there- I really liked this.. I think that the vagueness is not bad in this.. a rare occasion. It seems more a moment, more of an emotion that is ...

This was great.. simply stated.. easy to relate to, real. Great piece... the lines could be shortened I think, but otherwise, I think this was perfect. I've been in situations ...

Hi there.. here to review. :) I agree that you should remove the spoiler, and simply rate the entire piece. I would also elaborate on that section.. it's very bluntly ...

Hi there- Nice piece you have here.. I think that the emotional connection with the reader could be strengthened a bit.. perhaps more background or description of the people in ...