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I LOVE this poem! :D Super original, creative, and adorable... wonderfully done. What a cute poem. c: Reminds me a lot of something by Shel Silverstein in its quirkiness and ...

I would try to add in some more "showing" rather than "telling". These are some lines that I think could be rephrased to offer more imagery or interest for the ...

Okay- sorry in advance. This is going to be being hypocritical, as I just recently mentioned useless reviews. But, I have absolutely nothing critical to say about this. This actually ...

As usual, I'm about to give you the most useless review ever. I hope you don't mind too much. So- beautiful descriptions once again. I love the simplicity of the ...

Beautiful images, though some of the phrasing doesn't make sense- you start the poem using it as one long sentence, as I've seen in haiku often times before. But then, ...

Okay- to be blunt. I'm going to confuse you. I have pretty much the opposite to say of your previous review. I loved the first stanza- it was undoubtedly my ...

I would take another look at this grammatically, and fix up the mistakes and whatnot. Also, I know that this was a real event for you, but it's also some ...

Nice piece- love the rhythm. Only part I had a question about what "wombded". Was that supposed to be "wounded"? Other than that, very nicely done. Love the unique beat ...

Really interesting concept- I like it. I would stress some points, make it more dramatic with some description- what does the coffin feel like? Physically and metaphorically? What does their ...

Great piece- the voice is really strong, and the situation is unfolded very well. I would think about making the main character more human- stress his loving side, how he ...

You don't even want to know how awful I was at writing in the sixth grade. It was disastrous. And this is super duper adorable. :D Love the little rhyming ...

Beautiful piece- the only thing that really irked me was the line, "An example would be". It reminded me too much of writing essays when I was little, and being ...

Hi there- great concept! :) I would consider running this through spellcheck, first of all. I would also consider changing//fixing up the tone a bit. It seems almost flippant towards ...

I can totally relate to this- I'm not quite as far as you... I'm still just a Senior in high school. But, even just thinking about the future can make ...

Lovely piece- not sure if I fully understand the meaning behind it, but the writing itself is wonderfully done. Love the subtle rhymes and the structure. For some reason, I ...