Butterfinger

Hmm....It's still a little confusing to me....oh well :)

My favorite lines: You build your walls But he came in I can relate to different ways...Brilliant!

Hey there! Brilliant! Only 'gonna' seems to take away the feel of it to me...it's just a pet peeve of mine.

You always seem to touch down on one firm topic..Love it!

My favorite line: This verbal portrait Brilliant! Keep writing! You've a nack for it!

Once again, simple yet great! My only urk is that 'glass' and 'happiness' don't seem to rhyme very well. Other than that, Great work!

I like this piece! Simple, yet I can feel the emotion. It's interesting in a way that I can't explain. Great work!

Hi-ya! This is for sure interesting! p.s. in your signature, the poem Invictus by Ernest Henley is actually : "....mater of my fate.....captain of my soul"

Wow, I really like this! It's so cool you're basing it off your own art work! Brilliant! My Favorite part: Feel the wind sweep through your hair. Touch the sunshine, ...

Hi-ya! I'm not good at long reviews but this is interesting! Creepy too!

Very.....interesting :)

Hey there! I could really get into this piece because it was so full of dialogue...not much description.

I love this! Beautiful truth spilled out in letters. I like how you showed a glimpse of the reaction of the reader. I thought it was really brilliant!

Very interesting......hmmmm

I think you have the right 'passed.' 'Past' is more used as a tense and 'passed' is the action of passing by something. Hope this helps!