Burrow

Thanks for the review, ill get to fixing those as soon as I can.

I loved that, it was a great ending and well written, please keep me posted if you ever write more. It sounds like it will become a very good story!! ...

Well I didn't write this to get reviews, and I know its not great, and I found it very offensive how you said it made it sound like I didn't ...

I didn't write it as a poem, I don't know what it is I just wrote, it well because...

Yes, they are arrogant so they call m e both...

its not a poem, and yes I to care about racism, I didn't write it for you, or anyone. I wrote it for me...

Thanks, yeah I will try that thanks for the suggestion. I plan to write some more soon.

Don't be embarrassed its fine, you did a really good job!!

Thanks for the review, Mr gravity is Burrow. Secondly, the action and adventure will start the next Chapter, the earth or the complex, will send him of, or so on ...

I'm going to like this because it is so random, anyway what was the point of it??

Thanks for the review, I will try and fix the mistakes ,ad try to be more descriptive in my next few story's. Thanks!! Jack

You asked me to take a look at this, at the start I was just doing it for a favour, but man I really enjoyed it, and I am going ...

that's fine!!

Thanks a heap!!!! I will work on my grammar, and I wills tart writing the next chapter!!

slytherin, nice quiz!!