Burrow

Thanks for the review, and great support, it really helps!

That's fine, though I am changing them around, the hybrid story I am doing is joining with this one, it doesn't make sense know but you will see!

yeah its up to you, either way I love your idea!

I agree with you, but nick names are usually more short. It up to you though. Maybe they could just change their name to something else like Beatrice in divergent.

Thanks for the short review. :)

You really should, it would be epic!!

Thanks I totally agree with you on everything, I do need to go through and add stuff, and I really badly need to!

Thanks for the review, ill get to those mistakes soon, as for why I don't explain much, Burrow is a bit out of it and so I make it feel ...

That helped so much, ill get to those problems as soon as I can, Nu is his wolvenhound and he is riding her, sorry if that isn't clear.

Thanks

Thanks ill try and fix those up, and I agree with you!

I fixed it up, mostly though just adding more detail, I go through editing later. Thanks again

Thanks for the review!

Yeah haha, I'm doing it for NaNo so it wont be posted for a while:) Thanks gain for the review! oh and I'm up to chapter 27 now :)

Thanskf or the review, I will get to those problems as soon as I can