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Re: Project: LOVE [Chapter 10 - Edited]
Jack here for a review. I found this chapter very different from the last one, I don't know why but I felt that I saw a different side of Lara, ...
Dec 6, 2014 -
Re: A True Potty Mouth
Sounds like my friends at my school. But this is very funny, and well odd. good job. I liked it, and I know that you are always very good at ...
Dec 6, 2014 -
Re: ~Suicide Note~
Wow, that touched my heart, it really did, I just read it over and over again, it really moved me, I really hope that this isn't actually happening in your ...
Dec 6, 2014 -
Re: The good, the bad, and the ungrateful
Someone finally understands me! You made me cry inside, that was beautiful and wow! It was full of amazing emotion, and well I loved it, there was nothing at fault, ...
Dec 6, 2014 -
Re: Big Brother: An Atypical Apocalyptic Journey
Jack here for a review, I hope it helps! Ok so when I first saw this I was extremely daunted by the size of the paragraphs and the actual amount ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Starman Prologue (Part 2/?) : Stealing a Picture and the Moon
Jack here for a review. As with the first chapter I really do like what you have going here, I can really relate to you characters, and this story is ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Breath of Air
Jack here for a short review. Well I see that everyone else has pointed out something they like and dislike, so I thought I would do the same, and tell ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Silence
Jack here for a short review. I see everyone else has already gone through this, but I couldn't help but leave a short review, because I absolutely love you poems, ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: A War With No End Chapter 1
Jack here for the promised review. Ok firstly I absolutely love the idea that you have hear, it is wonderful, and your writing takes it do the full potential! I ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Blackbird Singing Chapter 2
Jack here for a review! Ok this is just getting so much better, don't you all agree! congrats Artemis, this is awesome. I love this guy Tonks, and I love ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Blackbird Singing Chapter 1
Jack here for a review! Ok I love Harry Potter, and this was perfectly done Fan Fiction. You are almost as good as J.K Rowling (Almost!). Anyway I love what ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 2: The Magicians
Jack here for a review! Ok so I absolutely love the idea that you have here, and starting today, which is review day, I will be trying to get through ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Prisoner to the stagger
Jack here for a quick review. That is one heck of a long poem, but I loved it the whole way through! it was funny and sad at the same ...
Nov 29, 2014 -
Re: I'll never know
That was sweet and beautiful. Jack here for a quick review! That felt different to most poems, it was rushed or anything but it felt laid back and it was ...
Nov 29, 2014 -
Re: Life
Jack here for a review :) That was short and sweet, it was a very nice poem, and hate a lot of emotion. Though I felt you could have added ...
Nov 29, 2014