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Greeting Noridori. Very whimsical piece of work indeed! The spiral itself gives the vibe of a flower (thanks for the tip-) I love the layout I swear, never saw anything ...

Hello Silly Billy, this was indeed horror-- I loved it ofcourse. Then let's start the review shall we? "A slip" you say, at the start. Which are usually accidental, but ...

Hello Silly, definitely not Billy! Your poem is very interesting, it's a dream sequence afterall ^0^ (most of it, yes). I barely know how to interpret this, but it is ...

Nataleen, I'm a big fan of you! >v< Every work of yours is like a masterpiece. This one gives me Laufey vibes haha, prolly cuz of the last two lines. ...

Hey there Alex! I really liked your work, the vivid imagery about nature, earth. I love how it is in first-person point of view, from earth themself. My favorite part ...

Hello Silly and so not Billy! And welcome to YWS~ I rrrrreallllyy loved your poem!!!!! I would have to say it's wierd, and I here for it! (A lot of ...

Hello BreezySprout, I saw the short description of the poem. I was kind of anxious whether I should leave a review or not. I'm sorry what you had gone through, ...

Hello there fellow writer~ First of all, what a lovely poem! It's literally shining and twinkling ^0^ Okay then, let's start the review shall we? >v< The poem is simple, ...

Hello Amauster fellow, nice work! ^^ First of all, this prose is pretty much self explanatory and easy to understand (good for an amateur reviewer like me :^) I believe ...

Hello Noridori ^^ I really loved your prose, especially the last part. The title explains the theme of the prose itself (thanks for sharing the meaning to hehe). I can ...

Hello Sulagna! Really liked your poem ^^ I assume your poem is about the narrator being hurt by someone's words, behavior or any hurtful actions. There's feeling of hollow For ...

Well *coughs* I always have to pull out my musty old dictionary because of you, even for one word atleast Anyways--- this had me awing ^0^ This poem feels like ...

Hello TheRebel20007! I came upon your work for the first time I think ^^ It's a unique piece for me. It feels like a lyric piece of a song. I ...

Cool work. It really shines out the nostalgia. How it was like any ordinary friendship, but it still stay inside the core of our heart. To be honest I'm not ...

Nice work horsey! It felt like one the bizarre short stories and really pull you in. First of all, I think it was all a dream sequence, where the MC ...