BrokenSkye

I can't express good emotions the way I can with things like this. Nobody really enjoys reading that type of work from me because they say that it all sounds ...

Haha, umm, not really sure how to respond to this one! I'm glad you liked it? XD haha

I'm sorry, what do you want me to do with capitalizing letters? :/ I'm a little confused

It was a rap that came out of no where, I am sorry that you didn't like it.

Where does it get confusing? I want to know where I need to work at most. :)

I have changed the whole thing, I must of been forcing creativity and inspiration where none was when I wrote the first one. I hope you like this one though!

I have changed the whole thing, I must of been forcing creativity and inspiration where none was when I wrote the first one. I hope you like this one though!

I have changed the whole thing, I must of been forcing creativity and inspiration where none was when I wrote the first one. I hope you like this one though!

Sadly yes, it is a personal story. To be quite honest, this is probably one of my more truthful stories, everything in it did really happen. BUT I did exaggerate ...

I am glad that you liked it, I will try and fix the first three stanzas so that they are as powerful as the last three. I do agree that ...

I will try to work on adding some reasoning into it, thanks. :)

I think writing in paragraph format makes the whole thing look choppy with longer lines having shorter lines after it. It just looks bad in my opinion. I will definitely ...

The assignment was to pick two subjects to write about. But the humor meant the stanza that is all about how I am so funny that blah blah blah. I ...

The assignment was to pick two subjects to write about. But the humor meant the stanza that is all about how I am so funny that blah blah blah. I ...

No, I don't mind at all :) Glad you liked it, I was a little worried with this because I am not one to rhyme, so this really means alot! ...