Boolovesyou

I think first off you could write a lot more to describe it. I didn't really feel anything reading this. I thought maybe you were writing a story of a ...

First off were the pictures yours? Because they were each very unique, well, Other than the red lips. Those are over used. ANYWAY. On to the Haiku. They were awesome. ...

Lily! Beautiful girl! Smile for Mummy!’ * ‘Oh, you did so well! I’m so proud of you!’ * ‘The first is always the hardest!’ * ‘Can I have a little ...

The paragon of posterity: faked suicides in Explain? one hundred forty characters or less, always less. Huh? Not really needed... One hundred forty acts of heroism, slaying the beast of ...

Every minute without you is torture for me . What are we to do? To be in love without the touch of the other? To not be able to express ...

It sounds like you were just ranting to be honest. I like the idea and some of your lines are really good, but others are confusing. I say you rewrite ...

This is a really good piece. Honestly, Its so good because LOTS of people can relate. While some points of it were dry and weird like the part about Chipotle ...

Hey, Boo here! Cry me a river, the water wont make me shiver. You're the reason my lips quiver. You intoxicate my liver. This line seems so forced really annoys ...

Hey Boo here! She was known for her disappearances. I think it was the rush of uncertainty about whether or not anyone would actually look for her that made her ...

Hey Boo Here! Boulevard Stefan Stambolov 27- the address of a large, crumbling building, a reminiscent of the Communist era. The building has twelve floors, sixty apartments. It is filled ...

Hey Boo here! First off nitpicks, and bear with me because for some reason my font choices ( bold and ect..) aren't working so your going to have to look ...

Snow is very controversial topic. Some people hate it and some people love it. Of course there are the ones, Who take it as it is. It’s cold and wet, ...

."The old days when humans were cargo are found in grave yards, with tomb stones that mimick Mimic that no man is truely good truly and boney, blood-dried fingers. Bony ...

Don't cry, tears of steel Sometimes it's better not to feel Don't cry, wipe your eyes Just remember all the lies Don't cry, let it out In a red river ...

Oh, I loved it! Its beautiful, and poetic. Only few nitpicks. Niki's everything I wish I could be These word are over used. Strong and brave and beautiful Read aloud, ...